Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Deltora, Final Fantasy DVD, and Sebielina Saiya.

Deltora, Final Fantasy DVD, and Sebielina Saiya.
I would like to infuse three mediums together they are Deltora Quest (Book) Cloud, from Final Fantasy (DVD & Computer Game). And Sebielina Saiya, Vampire Princess of the Dark Forests, Transylvania. (From my head).

Many years have past since the victory against the evil Tyrant the Shadow Lord.Leif, Barda and Jasmine are enjoying the quiet times, but no sooner do they begin to relax they are called upon by others that are not of their world. So the story begins...
As the night sky descends to allow in a new day, Leif is surprised to see a huge cloud dust in the distant heading for the castle at a speed that he has not seen in the kingdom of Deltora.He shouts to Doom, his most trusted confidante.

"Doom, come quickly!" shouts Leif! Doom, bursts through the door with his sword at the ready to find the King standing in the chamber-room alone. He quickly glances around the room; he looks to his king with a bewildered look on his face.

"What has happened, Leif?" asks Doom with much confusion."I fear a new enemy has arrived in Deltora." replies Leif, with a dread look on his face."What is it you want monster!" hollers Leif to the all black shiny object.
The doors on a black 2022 Holden Sport sedan open and at the exact same time the Kings heavily armed guards surround the entire castle rooftops the bridge is slammed locked!Leif looses his balance and stumbles backwards he realizes that a beautiful woman with porcelain white skin and light red hair is standing directly in front of him.He gains his step and points his sword, but she has disappeared? Leif is not sure at what he is seeing, are you a spirit?


"My name is Cloud, i am from a PlayStation game as well as a Movie called Final Fantasy.VII - Advent Children and this is The Vampire Princess, of the Gypsy Clan in the Dark Forests of Transylvania her name is Sebielina Saiya.”Leif looks to his left to see Sebielina, gliding towards her companion.
She is clearly a witch, decides Leif."
"I am King Leif, of Deltora!" "Who are you and what is that black monster that spat you out?"
"Huh...That would be the Princesses wheels." said Cloud...He then realizes that he is speaking perfect English.What has happened to my mother tongue?? Confused he stands back to gather his thoughts."Why have you come to Deltora, strangers?" asks Leif."Do you know something called the Shadow Lord?" asks Sebielina.“What did you say!!" chokes Leif with a lump in his throat the size of The Wennbar.

"So you do know of it then, good! It has been killing many of my clan and the clan of the one who calls himself Cloud!" said Sebielina in her quiet and sweetly voice."We learnt that it was sent from a place called Deltora, the princess found a way of transporting us to this place, it comes with living for many, many centuries you experience so much." interrupted Cloud.

"So, you will come back with us to our worlds before it evolves into a disater!" stress Cloud and Sebielina.
So, will he or will he not go with the strangers??? Personally I think he will go he is quite a honorable young man. What do you think… here’s a Final Fantasy website. http://www.square-enix-usa.com/dvd/ff7ac/ and meet Cloud.

R*_*

4 comments:

  1. Quite an ambitious plan, combining three story lines into one. It looks good so far -- can't wait to ready more!

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  2. This is a really good idea!! Good to see you are doing something different!
    Cant wait to see how it all comes together!

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  3. i like how you have blended the old and new with futuristic cars and castles and sort of tying it down with cloud seeing as he was late 90's early 00's i think. the dialog is awesome and flows really well, im not entirely sure if cloud should announce that he is from playstation or not maybe leave it unsaid? just a suggestion. i agree with abby this is quite ambitious but youll be able to pull it off. also cant wait to read more.

    chur

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  4. Be careful of keeping the narritive flowing. It took me a couple of reads to understand the way you where taking the story.
    All the content is great just needs to be tweaked so it flows better. This might be helped by cutting down some of the dialouge...

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