conor's fan fiction

i missed the last few classes i figure we are doing our fan fics about twilight so here goes.

My senses, all of them start to dim and fuzz around the edges, like when you burn the sides of a letter to make it look old fashioned. This means I'm about to see something, usually something bad. But i guess i shouldn't be expecting the worst even when the worst is usually logically expected these days. Ok, here we go.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touched i was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am i seeing this?

ok so that the start of mine im doing it from Alice's point of view (Edwards sister) she has visions this is her 'power' in the twilight world. I thought it was a good chance to write some descriptive stuff.