I don't like this fanfic. I think it's weak, it doesn't sound as Edward would sound. I think this person should rewrite or just stop!! Its just so unrealistic i think.
I agree completely, this doesn't sound like Edward at all. Probably the hardest part of writing fan-fiction is really knowing the characters you're writing about, enough that you can sound like them.
I agree completely, this doesn't sound like Edward at all. Probably the hardest part of writing fan-fiction is really knowing the characters you're writing about, enough that you can sound like them.
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