I quite like this fanfic, it is quite close to the book but it has differences; like Rosalie pushing Bella over and Alice and Jasper in the forest. It would be interesting to see how many changes this person makes or how closely they are going to follow the book!
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I liked this one on the whole, but some of the writing seems a bit cheesy: "I grabbed an apple, two pieces of celery, and a banana. Yes, I’m a vegetarian." It sounds a bit young, not as lovely as the real books.
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