My senses, all of them start to dim and fuzz around the edges, like when you burn the sides of a letter to make it look old fashioned. This means I'm about to see something, usually something bad. But I guess I shouldn't be expecting the worst even when the worst is usually logically expected these days. Ok, here we go.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touch I was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am I seeing this?
Then I remember, 'it's what I do.' Draw. Why did I not think of this straight away, always draw what you see Alice, I try to remind myself of this every time. Reaching for the nearest pad of bland hotel notepad I start to scrawl down what I'm seeing. "What are you doing love?" I completely forgot Jasper was here, no time to explain. Draw. As the vision starts to fade ever so slightly, releasing my head from the vice that held it so tightly over the last few seconds the paper comes into view, slipping through my retina as the photographic image fades from my sight, replaced by a surprisingly accurate translation kneaded into the paper in front of me with the pen I am holding. The pen has started to crack under the pressure with which I was holding it. Sweat slides down the back of my neck creating a film that holds my shirt to my back against its will.
Jasper.
"I think if know where James is. He is here in Phoenix Jasper, here in Phoenix."
"In that case we need to make sure Bella stays close by."
How can Jasper be so calm? Maybe it’s just the adrenaline from my 'vision' but calm is the last feeling that my mind could comprehend, and then I feel it. Jasper must have sensed my mood. Slowly my pulse slows, heart beat fades back to a normal pace and the last grip of the vice is finally undone. This is one of the many things that makes loving Jasper so easy and complete, his ability to set a mood upon an entire room, I truly could not suffer eternity without him. Then Jasper suddenly utters the worst possible scenario for this moment. "Alice, where is Bella." "Shit."
She’s gone. This is not good at all; her scent is still lingering though.
Then all of a sudden who should walk through the door holding a fucking soda? Bella. "Where have you been? We were panicking, look I've had a vision, do you recognize this place." Bella's face dropped and her brow creased. "This is my old ballet studio. It’s just down the road." "And that’s where James is." Bella jumped, she had obviously forgotten Jasper was here.
A phone rings, it's Edward for Bella. They go off into the bedroom and talk. I have to think about how I'm going to explain this to Edward, he thought she would be safe here, there is no way he won't over react, is it even over reacting? Why would James, no how would James know about Bella's old studio, unless.
"Jasper, we have to make sure Bella's mom is ok. Think about it. How else would James know about the studio?"
"Yeah but she’s out of town, right?"
This is true technically she shouldn't be back for weeks, the stress is nearly too much.
Bella has finished talking with Edward. My turn. "Hey there brother" I say sarcastically, that joke never gets old. "What is it Alice?" Damn he just knows, every time.
"Well, see, James might be.......kind of"
"OUT WITH IT ALICE"
"well kind of.......here in Phoenix, at Bella's old ballet studio."
"................"
"We think he is going to try and lure her there, but we have it all under control."
"I'm on the NEXT flight, why did you not call me immediately??"
"Chill out Edward, I'm still coming down from my 'vision' you were the first person I was going to call, and you don't need to come down here, everything is fine."
'Click.'
"He's coming, probably with Carlisle and Emmet."
"Figures, Emmet can never resist a good fight."
"Jasper this is hardly the time to be amping for a fight."
"Then when is Alice?"
"Uhhh excuse me, could someone please fill me in?"
oh Bella, that's right.
"Edward and the other boys are coming down; he's blown this whole thing out of proportion."
"I wish he would do what best for him and stop babying me."
"Bella, it’s only cause he cares about you more than anyone that has ever existed."
"I know."
Of course she knows, how could you not Edward is so god dam smitten with her even I'm a little grossed out.
It's morning already? Ha-ha Bella snores, cute. Guess we should wake her; the others will be at the airport around midday. It’s annoying how due to Edwards’s stubbornness we have to try to maneuver during the daytime, time to put on the big, heavy, ugly clothes.
"Jasper, how are we going to do this?"
"Let’s go and talk to the front desk and see if we can't get our car parked around back, it'll be a start."
"Good idea love, let’s go, we can wake Bella when we get back."
Bella wakes at the sound of the door sliding shut and the lock clicking quickly into place, or so she thought. It was really her phone vibrating under the night worn pillow.
"Hello??"
"Bella? Bella?"
"Calm down mom.Mom?"
"Bella, your mother is safe as long as you do me this one tiny little favor.........
Wednesday, August 12, 2009
conors final fan fic
hey guys my microsoft word trial expired i tried downloading a new version but it didnt work so ill have my final version up in the am tomorrow. sorry for the delay goddamn computers. x
Tuesday, August 11, 2009
Claire's Final Twilight Fanfic
Prologue: Edward disappears on a hunting trip. Everyone is worried because Alice didn’t see this happening. The Cullens go looking for him and leave Bella in the care of Jacob and the wolves. Bella turns to Jacob for comfort. Sometime passes (Cullens are still trying to find Edward) Jacob falls in love with Bella. After about a couple of months Edward suddenly arrives back in Forks and rushes to see Bella only to see Jacob and Bella walking in the forest together and that she is pregnant. But where has Edward been? Why couldn’t the Cullens find him? Why didn’t Alice see him leaving? What is going to happen when Bella sees Edward? Who will she choose?
He always hated leaving me, and I hated him leaving too, but I could see the thirst in his eyes. It was the usual façade of hiking on the weekend. Edward was going alone this time, but he said he would be back as soon as he could.
Alice and I were going to have a sleep over. I dreaded these, it was always so tiring being her Barbie doll to dress up and put make up on.
“Be safe, try not to hurt yourself while I’m gone.” Edward said with a smirk on his face.
“I’ll do my best.” I said returning his smirk.
With a quick but passionate kiss he was gone. And I was on my way to Alice’s for our sleep over. When I arrived Alice was at the front door waiting for me with an excited smile across her face.
“Hi Bella!”
“Hey Alice, so what’s the plan for tonight?” I said hesitantly, hoping it wouldn’t be too painful.
“I thought we could paint our nails and give each other facials.”
“Hmm sure!” I said trying to hide my discomfort; Alice knows I’m not one for girlie things.
The night went surprisingly fast. Not as painful as I thought, I suppose I’m getting used to Alice’s girlie nights. After our facials I went to bed, all this pampering makes you very sleepy. I slept soundly, in the bed that Edward had bought for me for when I stay. I woke up early; I could hear a lot of movement downstairs. I got up, dressed and went downstairs. Esme and Alice were in the kitchen making me breakfast. It was very kind, as they don’t eat. I blushed as they made a fuss over me asking what I like, they made way too much just for on person. I ate as much as I could still there was plenty left over. I told Alice that I was going to go to visit Jacob, she looked at me for a while then handed me a cell phone and told me to call when I needed picking up. I took it and headed out the door.
Jacob and I spent the whole day together, just hanging out in his garage chatting away while he worked on his car. I loved hanging out with Jake he was my best friend. It’s so easy with him, until he starts up “you’ll be better off with me” speech. Then things get a bit awkward until I change the subject or we end up having a fight and then he apologizes and we go back to being best friends. I didn’t realize how late it was until I stepped outside it was pitch black. I rang Alice to come get me.
Alice picked me up from the boarder, the line that the Cullens can’t cross over onto Quileute’s land. She was very strange in the car, not driving the usual excessive speed that the Cullens drove at.
“What’s wrong Alice?”
“Wait till we get home I’ll tell you then”
“No Alice tell me now, its Edward isn’t it?”
“ Yes, but wait till we’re home we’ll explain then.”
“No Alice tell me now!”
“Ok Ok please don’t freak out just yet” she paused for what seemed like eternity. “Edward hasn’t returned, we don’t know where he is. Jasper, Emmet and Carlisle have been out searching for him but they can find no trace of him. And I can’t see him in my visions.” She said the last part very slowly.
“WHAT! How can that be?”
“I don’t know.” She turned and looked at me, the tears streaming down my face. I couldn’t hold them back any longer. “Don’t worry Bella we’ll find him.”
When we arrived at the house Esme greeted me with a hug at the door, everyone else was in find Edward mode. Carlisle and Jasper were deep in conversation; Emmet and Rosalie were at the table looking at maps. I was guided to the couch. I was numb. Everything seemed like a blur. Everyone was coming and going only Esme was by my side looking after me she put a blanket on me and just sat stroking my hair. Alice was off trying to see Edward in her visions. When I woke Esme was still beside me but everything was quiet.
“Where is everyone? Has Edward come back?”
“No Bella, Alice managed a glimpse of him, so Alice and Jasper went about 3 hours ago to follow it up. Carlisle and I are going to visit some other vampires to see if they have seen him. Rosalie and Emmet are going to take you to stay with Jacob and the wolves, you’ll be safe with them.”
Tears spilled over, a constant flow unstoppable. All I could manage was a nod. Esme hugged me lead me to the car where Emmet and Rosalie were waiting.
The next few weeks were a blur, Jacob tried everything to cheer me up but all I could do was cry and sleep. I had constant up dates from the Cullens. Emmet and Rosalie were following a lead, but nothing else was new. Still no sign of him, no message nothing. My dreams became nightmares, I would wake up crying, Jacob had this frightened look in his eyes when I would wake up crying and couldn’t stop. All he could do was hug me until I had no more tears to cry.
Another 2 weeks went by I was back at school, still numb just trying to get through the day. Alice and Jasper had come back. She was surrounding herself with Edwards’s things trying to get another vision.
It was Friday afternoon School had finished early for the day and I was watching Jacob fix his car when my mind trailed off. That’s funny I thought, counting in my head, I’m never late. I immediately stood up and went to the bathroom and looked down at my little swollen belly. In a trance I walked out the door past the garage and into the forest Jacob trailing behind wondering what was going on. I walked for a while, just wandering no particular direction in mind, thinking about the baby. I came to the boarder and started walking along it clutching my swollen belly. I couldn’t hear Jacob behind me, but just kept walking then all of a sudden I herd a wolfs growl, Jacob’s growl. I whirled around to see Jacob and Edward growling and hissing at each other. I ran forward between them. Edward looked at me then to my belly sadness and horror glazed over his eyes. I had no time to explain I was suddenly pushed out of the way. When I looked up Edward and Jacob were leaping toward each other teeth bared.
Can Bella stop them in time? Can she explain? Who will she choose Edward or Jacob who has been looking after her never leaving her side?
Abby's Final Fanfic
Prior to each other’s respective marriages, Emma Woodhouse from Emma counsels Elizabeth Bennet of Pride and Prejudice on how she must handle the situation with Mr. Darcy. Emma, the consummate matchmaker, is full of advice for headstrong Lizzy, who brushes off all of Emma’s directions.
Emma: @lizzyB -- Lizzy, dear, I heard ur having troubles of the romantic sort. U know how I do love playing matchmaker… care 2 talk?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- No, thanx, I do not think I require ur gift of matching. Besides, I am sure u have ur hands full w/ that poor Harriet Smith.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Harriet is a lovely girl & w/ my help will be married in no time.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Yes, as I said, poor Harriet...
Emma: @LizzyB – Do not be silly. U know, not everyone is as hopeless as u on the subject of marriage. Mr. Darcy, 4 example…
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Darcy, an absolutely awful man, is of no concern to u. And I would say it is u, will all this matchmaking business, who is the silly one.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Calm down, dear. It is just that I know Darcy is quite keen on u and u mustn't be so quick to pass on such an offer.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Emma, u do not know what ur talking about. Darcy is nothing but a snob.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Not a snob at all! Darcy is a man of refined taste & character, the heir to a sizable fortune, AND he wants u! If u ask me u would be MAD not to accept his offer straight away...
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Unlike u, dear, there are more important things 2 me than society and fortune. The man I marry must appreciate that.
Emma: @LizzyB -- And if no such man presents himself?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Then I should be perfectly content to remain unmarried.
Emma: @LizzyB – That sort of talk sounds all too modern, if u ask me. A suitable marriage prospect is what a girl works 2ward. It is why, after all, she is educated and presented in2 society.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Educated all for the purpose of entertaining suitors? What about the betterment of the mind & the value of literature and art and music?
Emma: @LizzyB – That is all well and good, Lizzy, but Darcy can hardly be expected to put up with such selfishness in his future wife. U have to give a little, no?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – I am more than willing to give if he will. Marriage must be a compromise b/w equals, not a sentence in servitude 4 a wife to her husband.
Emma: @LizzyB – Too progressive, Lizzy. Scale back.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – But it is not just Darcy’s antiquated expectations of a wife -- he is also insufferably cold, far quick to judge & severely lacks any sense of humor, of playfulness.
Emma: @LizzyB -- I am sure that is not true.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- I do contend I have never seen him smile but once!
Emma: @LizzyB – He is simply guarded. U cannot expect such a dignified man to reveal all facets of his character without some coaxing – wit and charm and pride and intelligence, all at once?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – But I should hope so!
Emma: @LizzyB – Besides, Darcy is accustomed to classless advances given his wealth. U can hardly blame him 4 being suspect of new acquaintances.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – I suppose that sounds fair.
Emma: @LizzyB – Ah! I detect a change of heart in that tweet… :)
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Not so hasty. If Darcy is capable of warmth and compassion, I have yet to witness it. But that will be enough of Darcy. Tell me, how is ur dear Mr. Knightly?
Emma: @LizzyB – Knightly? He is fine, but I would hardly call him my dear.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Oh Emma! After all ur matches, and as gifted as u claim to be in the art of love, I would expect u 2 recognize it in ur own heart when it appears.
Emma: @LizzyB – I am sure I do not know what ur talking about – Knightly is but a dear friend.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Friend…?
Emma: @LizzyB – U cannot be suggesting, Lizzy, that Knightly and are well suited for one another.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Emma, dear, that is precisely what I am suggesting! Ur blind to it, 4 whatever reason, but I am sure of u + Knightly, as sure as u r of myself + Darcy.
Emma: @LizzyB – Knightly is a confidant, like family, but I cannot be in love w/ him. He too…
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Yes? Do complete the tweet, dear.
Emma: @LizzyB –He’s just so practical, so responsible, so… old.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Knightly has always been by ur side, watching over u, guiding u out of genuine admiration. I am sure in ur heart u feel the same 4 him.
Emma: @LizzyB – Do u really think so?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – I cannot believe u, so preoccupied with the contents of others’ hearts, could be so unaware of the contents of ur own!
Emma: @LizzyB – Perhaps ur right…
Emma: @lizzyB -- Lizzy, dear, I heard ur having troubles of the romantic sort. U know how I do love playing matchmaker… care 2 talk?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- No, thanx, I do not think I require ur gift of matching. Besides, I am sure u have ur hands full w/ that poor Harriet Smith.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Harriet is a lovely girl & w/ my help will be married in no time.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Yes, as I said, poor Harriet...
Emma: @LizzyB – Do not be silly. U know, not everyone is as hopeless as u on the subject of marriage. Mr. Darcy, 4 example…
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Darcy, an absolutely awful man, is of no concern to u. And I would say it is u, will all this matchmaking business, who is the silly one.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Calm down, dear. It is just that I know Darcy is quite keen on u and u mustn't be so quick to pass on such an offer.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Emma, u do not know what ur talking about. Darcy is nothing but a snob.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Not a snob at all! Darcy is a man of refined taste & character, the heir to a sizable fortune, AND he wants u! If u ask me u would be MAD not to accept his offer straight away...
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Unlike u, dear, there are more important things 2 me than society and fortune. The man I marry must appreciate that.
Emma: @LizzyB -- And if no such man presents himself?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Then I should be perfectly content to remain unmarried.
Emma: @LizzyB – That sort of talk sounds all too modern, if u ask me. A suitable marriage prospect is what a girl works 2ward. It is why, after all, she is educated and presented in2 society.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Educated all for the purpose of entertaining suitors? What about the betterment of the mind & the value of literature and art and music?
Emma: @LizzyB – That is all well and good, Lizzy, but Darcy can hardly be expected to put up with such selfishness in his future wife. U have to give a little, no?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – I am more than willing to give if he will. Marriage must be a compromise b/w equals, not a sentence in servitude 4 a wife to her husband.
Emma: @LizzyB – Too progressive, Lizzy. Scale back.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – But it is not just Darcy’s antiquated expectations of a wife -- he is also insufferably cold, far quick to judge & severely lacks any sense of humor, of playfulness.
Emma: @LizzyB -- I am sure that is not true.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- I do contend I have never seen him smile but once!
Emma: @LizzyB – He is simply guarded. U cannot expect such a dignified man to reveal all facets of his character without some coaxing – wit and charm and pride and intelligence, all at once?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – But I should hope so!
Emma: @LizzyB – Besides, Darcy is accustomed to classless advances given his wealth. U can hardly blame him 4 being suspect of new acquaintances.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – I suppose that sounds fair.
Emma: @LizzyB – Ah! I detect a change of heart in that tweet… :)
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Not so hasty. If Darcy is capable of warmth and compassion, I have yet to witness it. But that will be enough of Darcy. Tell me, how is ur dear Mr. Knightly?
Emma: @LizzyB – Knightly? He is fine, but I would hardly call him my dear.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Oh Emma! After all ur matches, and as gifted as u claim to be in the art of love, I would expect u 2 recognize it in ur own heart when it appears.
Emma: @LizzyB – I am sure I do not know what ur talking about – Knightly is but a dear friend.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Friend…?
Emma: @LizzyB – U cannot be suggesting, Lizzy, that Knightly and are well suited for one another.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Emma, dear, that is precisely what I am suggesting! Ur blind to it, 4 whatever reason, but I am sure of u + Knightly, as sure as u r of myself + Darcy.
Emma: @LizzyB – Knightly is a confidant, like family, but I cannot be in love w/ him. He too…
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Yes? Do complete the tweet, dear.
Emma: @LizzyB –He’s just so practical, so responsible, so… old.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Knightly has always been by ur side, watching over u, guiding u out of genuine admiration. I am sure in ur heart u feel the same 4 him.
Emma: @LizzyB – Do u really think so?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – I cannot believe u, so preoccupied with the contents of others’ hearts, could be so unaware of the contents of ur own!
Emma: @LizzyB – Perhaps ur right…
Claire's Final Draft Twilight Fanfic
Prologue: Edward disappears on a hunting trip. Everyone is worried because Alice didn’t see this happening. The Cullens go looking for him and leave Bella in the care of Jacob and the wolves. Bella turns to Jacob for comfort. Sometime passes (Cullens are still trying to find Edward) Jacob falls in love with Bella. After about a couple of months Edward suddenly arrives back in Forks and rushes to see Bella only to see Jacob and Bella walking in the forest together and that she is pregnant. But where has Edward been? Why couldn’t the Cullens find him? Why didn’t Alice see him leaving? What is going to happen when Bella sees Edward? Who will she choose?
He always hated leaving me, and I hated him leaving too, but I could see the thirst in his eyes. It was the usual façade of hiking on the weekend. Edward was going alone this time, but he said he would be back as soon as he could.
Alice and I were going to have a sleep over. I dreaded these, it was always so tiring being her Barbie doll to dress up and put make up on.
“Be safe, try not to hurt yourself while I’m gone.” Edward said with a smirk on his face.
“I’ll do my best.” I said returning his smirk.
With a quick but passionate kiss he was gone. And I was on my way to Alice’s for our sleep over. When I arrived Alice was at the front door waiting for me with an excited smile across her face.
“Hi Bella!”
“Hey Alice, so what’s the plan for tonight?” I said hesitantly, hoping it wouldn’t be too painful.
“I thought we could paint our nails and give each other facials.”
“Hmm sure!” I said trying to hide my discomfort; Alice knows I’m not one for girlie things.
As Alice was painting my nails I drifted off to sleep. My dream was so vivid, Edward and I were hunting some mountain lions, the sun was setting, the light was so beautiful reflecting of his marble skin. As we were running, chasing a the lion I turned to look at him, his beautiful body was engaged in the hunt, his eyes focused on the kill, his muscles defined my every movement then suddenly he disappeared. I stopped in my tracks looking around for him. My eyes scanned the forest. He was gone.
I woke up in such a panic that Alice got a fright.
“What’s wrong Bella?”
“Oh umm nothing…just a dream.” I said. I didn’t want to worry her about my silly dream.
“Ok are you sure? You look like you’ve seen a ghost!”
“Yeah I’m good. I might just go and splash some water on my face.”
“Sure, don’t take too long we still have to do our facials remember!”
“Yeah, how can I forget” I said with a chuckle. Alice gave me her biggest grin, which made me feel better.
After our facials I went to bed, all this pampering makes you very sleepy. I slept soundly, in the bed that Edward had bought for me fro when I stay. I woke up early; I could hear a lot of movement downstairs. I got up, dressed and went downstairs. Esme and Alice were in the kitchen making me breakfast. It was very kind, as they don’t eat. I blushed as they made a fuss over me asking what I like, they made way too much just for on person. I ate as much as I could still there was plenty left over. I told Alice that I was going to go to visit Jacob, she looked at me for a while then handed me a cell phone and told me to call when I needed picking up. I took it and headed out the door.
Jacob and I spent the whole day together, just hanging out in his garage chatting away while he worked on his car, I didn’t realize how late it was until I stepped outside it was pitch black. I rang Alice to come get me.
Alice picked me up from the boarder, the line that the Cullens can’t cross over onto Quileute’s land. She was very strange in the car, not driving the usual excessive speed that the Cullens drove at.
“What’s wrong Alice?”
“Wait till we get home I’ll tell you then”
“No Alice tell me now, its Edward isn’t it?”
“ Yes, but wait till we’re home we’ll explain then.”
“No Alice tell me now!”
“Ok Ok please don’t freak out just yet” she paused for what seemed like eternity. “Edward hasn’t returned, we don’t know where he is. Jasper, Emmet and Carlisle have been out searching for him but they can find no trace of him. And I can’t see him in my visions.” She said the last part very slowly.
“WHAT! How can that be?”
“I don’t know.” She turned and looked at me, the tears streaming down my face. I couldn’t hold them back any longer. “Don’t worry Bella we’ll find him.”
When we arrived at the house Esme greeted me with a hug at the door, everyone else was in find Edward mode. Carlisle and Jasper were deep in conversation; Emmet and Rosalie were at the table looking at maps. I was guided to the couch. I was numb. Everything seemed like a blur. Everyone was coming and going only Esme was by my side looking after me she put a blanket on me and just sat stroking my hair. Alice was off trying to see Edward in her visions. When I woke Esme was still beside me but everything was quiet.
“Where is everyone? Has Edward come back?”
“No Bella, Alice managed a glimpse of him, so Alice and Jasper went about 3 hours ago to follow it up. Carlisle and I are going to visit some other vampires to see if they have seen him. Rosalie and Emmet are going to take you to stay with Jacob and the wolves, you’ll be safe with them.”
Tears spilled over, a constant flow unstoppable. All I could manage was a nod. Esme hugged me lead me to the car where Emmet and Rosalie were waiting.
The next few weeks were a blur, Jacob tried everything to cheer me up but all I could do was cry and sleep. I had constant up dates from the Cullens. Emmet and Rosalie were following a lead, but nothing else was new. Still no sign of him, no message nothing. My dreams became nightmares, I would wake up crying, Jacob had this frightened look in his eyes when I would wake up crying and couldn’t stop. All he could do was hug me until I had no more tears to cry.
Another 2 weeks went by I was back at school, still numb just trying to get through the day. Alice and Jasper had come back. She was surrounding herself with Edwards’s things trying to get another vision.
It was Friday afternoon School had finished early for the day and I was watching Jacob fix his car when my mind trailed off. That’s funny I thought, counting in my head, I’m never late. I immediately stood up and went to the bathroom and looked down at my little swollen belly. In a trance I walked out the door past the garage and into the forest Jacob trailing behind wondering what was going on. i walked for a while, just wandering no particular direction in mind, thinking about the baby. I came to the boarder and started walking along it clutching my swollen belly. I couldn’t hear Jacob behind me, but just kept walking then all of a sudden I herd a wolfs growl, Jacob’s growl. I whirled around to see Jacob and Edward growling and hissing at each other. I ran forward between them. Edward looked at me then to my belly sadness and horror glazed over his eyes. I had no time to explain I was suddenly pushed out of the way. When I looked up Edward and Jacob were leaping toward each other teeth bared.
Can Bella stop them in time? Can she explain? Who will she choose Edward or Jacob who has been looking after her never leaving her side?
Daniel Twilight. FINAL FINISHED FANFIC
Twilight
Set after the events of the first book in the Twilight series Bella Swan and Edward Cullen are finally together without any worry… or so they think. Since arriving back in Forks being nearly killed by a bloodthirsty Vampire, Bella has not been the same. ..One thing is for sure someone will not make it out alive!
I have never feared for my own life before. But after coming so close to death recently at the hands of a hungry vampire, I have grown accustomed to the fact that one day, maybe not a long time from now, my life as I know it will be over. But for some reason, for the first time in my life that scared me.
A young girl stands on the edge of a cliff that looks out over the meandering ocean, the sky is grey, a man clad in a black jacket stands with her. She looks afraid, I close my eyes, only for a second, and when I open them she has gone. But the mysterious coat wearing figure stands tall in the same position looking out across the water.
That's when I wake up.
The same dream has been happening again and again since I returned to forks two short weeks ago. But it’s different from other dreams. It’s so clear and vivid. So clear I can touch the rocks I’m rested on high up on a rocky coastline. So vivid I can feel the bone chilling wind covering my body.
Who are the figures on the cliff face? What happened to the girl? Why is it so clear? And what’s it got to do with me? My mind is full of questions, but until I have answers I will not tell a soul, not even Edward.
My day started like any other day. I got dressed and went downstairs, like always Charlie was sitting in the same chair at the table reading the paper. I made some small talk about my plans for the day then left for school.
Edward was waiting in his usual place leaning against his shiny silver Volvo but something was different. His face was grim; his usual smirk that unfailingly mirrors mine when I see him was missing. I instantly knew something was wrong. My heart sank inside me as I sheepishly walked over to meet him, his golden eyes gazing thoughtfully into mine like he was trying to read my mind. I opened my mouth to speak but he beat me to it.
“Bella, I need to talk to you, it can’t wait.”
His tone was bleak, and I could sense that he had something very serious to tell me. He opened the passenger door of his car and I quickly got in, he was already in the car when I closed the door, his expression now colder than his skin. “Edward what is it your scaring me?” my voice raw with fear.
He ignored me as he started the car; my heart sank as we drove off at speed away from Forks.
“What are you doing?”I could not hide my fear.
“You are sick Bella, I know what you’re thinking, I can hear your thoughts as clear as any other person, and that can only mean one thing. Some of the venom from the vampire attack is still in your system”
“How could that happen? You sucked it all out?” I spoke at twice my normal pace.
“There is always a chance that some of the venom can remain, you are ok for now but eventually the chromosomes will multiply and overpower your system and ...” He couldn’t finish his sentence.
My mind couldn’t comprehend what it had just heard. Could this explain my dreams? I tried to speak but I couldn’t.
“There is only one way to stop this from happening” as Edward spoke the car came to a stop, I looked up and I could see water. We appeared to be at some sort of scenic tourist lookout, but the view, I had seen before....
Edward slowly got out of the car and started walking toward the cliff. As he walked he put on a long jet black jacket and pulled the hood over his head, he gestured for me to follow him. I hesitated but complied.
He came to a stop only a few feet from the edge, I stood a safe distance behind. For the first time since I met Edward I was afraid of him. He seemed completely different, and he looked at me like I was an entirely different person.
“Bella the only way we can stop the venom from killing you is to stop your heart, so Carlyle can operate. You need to drown so it looks like a harmless accident.”
It was clear now; the girl in my dreams was me. I mustered up the little energy I had left and spoke. “You can’t be serious, how can you be sure this will work?”
“Trust me”, he said as he took my hand and turned me around so my back faced the water. I didn’t struggle, for some strange reason the touch of his icy hand suddenly calmed me. I closed my eyes expecting the worst.
“I love you Bella” he whispered.
I opened my eyes just in time to catch a last glimpse of his perfect face as my body slipped from his embrace and fell towards the water below....
Set after the events of the first book in the Twilight series Bella Swan and Edward Cullen are finally together without any worry… or so they think. Since arriving back in Forks being nearly killed by a bloodthirsty Vampire, Bella has not been the same. ..One thing is for sure someone will not make it out alive!
I have never feared for my own life before. But after coming so close to death recently at the hands of a hungry vampire, I have grown accustomed to the fact that one day, maybe not a long time from now, my life as I know it will be over. But for some reason, for the first time in my life that scared me.
A young girl stands on the edge of a cliff that looks out over the meandering ocean, the sky is grey, a man clad in a black jacket stands with her. She looks afraid, I close my eyes, only for a second, and when I open them she has gone. But the mysterious coat wearing figure stands tall in the same position looking out across the water.
That's when I wake up.
The same dream has been happening again and again since I returned to forks two short weeks ago. But it’s different from other dreams. It’s so clear and vivid. So clear I can touch the rocks I’m rested on high up on a rocky coastline. So vivid I can feel the bone chilling wind covering my body.
Who are the figures on the cliff face? What happened to the girl? Why is it so clear? And what’s it got to do with me? My mind is full of questions, but until I have answers I will not tell a soul, not even Edward.
My day started like any other day. I got dressed and went downstairs, like always Charlie was sitting in the same chair at the table reading the paper. I made some small talk about my plans for the day then left for school.
Edward was waiting in his usual place leaning against his shiny silver Volvo but something was different. His face was grim; his usual smirk that unfailingly mirrors mine when I see him was missing. I instantly knew something was wrong. My heart sank inside me as I sheepishly walked over to meet him, his golden eyes gazing thoughtfully into mine like he was trying to read my mind. I opened my mouth to speak but he beat me to it.
“Bella, I need to talk to you, it can’t wait.”
His tone was bleak, and I could sense that he had something very serious to tell me. He opened the passenger door of his car and I quickly got in, he was already in the car when I closed the door, his expression now colder than his skin. “Edward what is it your scaring me?” my voice raw with fear.
He ignored me as he started the car; my heart sank as we drove off at speed away from Forks.
“What are you doing?”I could not hide my fear.
“You are sick Bella, I know what you’re thinking, I can hear your thoughts as clear as any other person, and that can only mean one thing. Some of the venom from the vampire attack is still in your system”
“How could that happen? You sucked it all out?” I spoke at twice my normal pace.
“There is always a chance that some of the venom can remain, you are ok for now but eventually the chromosomes will multiply and overpower your system and ...” He couldn’t finish his sentence.
My mind couldn’t comprehend what it had just heard. Could this explain my dreams? I tried to speak but I couldn’t.
“There is only one way to stop this from happening” as Edward spoke the car came to a stop, I looked up and I could see water. We appeared to be at some sort of scenic tourist lookout, but the view, I had seen before....
Edward slowly got out of the car and started walking toward the cliff. As he walked he put on a long jet black jacket and pulled the hood over his head, he gestured for me to follow him. I hesitated but complied.
He came to a stop only a few feet from the edge, I stood a safe distance behind. For the first time since I met Edward I was afraid of him. He seemed completely different, and he looked at me like I was an entirely different person.
“Bella the only way we can stop the venom from killing you is to stop your heart, so Carlyle can operate. You need to drown so it looks like a harmless accident.”
It was clear now; the girl in my dreams was me. I mustered up the little energy I had left and spoke. “You can’t be serious, how can you be sure this will work?”
“Trust me”, he said as he took my hand and turned me around so my back faced the water. I didn’t struggle, for some strange reason the touch of his icy hand suddenly calmed me. I closed my eyes expecting the worst.
“I love you Bella” he whispered.
I opened my eyes just in time to catch a last glimpse of his perfect face as my body slipped from his embrace and fell towards the water below....
Monday, August 10, 2009
Fanfic Second Draft
This is a fanfic combining Austen's Emma and Pride and Prejudice. It is a conversation between Emma Woodhouse and Elizabeth Bennet, all done through Twitter. (I realize some lines exceed the 140 character limit -- will handle that issue on the next draft.)
Emma: @lizzyB -- Lizzy, dear, I eard ur having troubles of the romantic sort. U know how I do love playing matchmaker… care 2 talk?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- No, thanx, I don’t think I require ur gift of matching. I'm sure u have ur hands full w/ that poor Harriet Smith.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Harriet is a lovely girl & w/ my help will be married in no time.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Yes, as I said, poor Harriet Smith...
Emma: @LizzyB -- Don’t be silly. U know, not everyone is as hopeless as u on the subject of marriage. Mr. Darcy, 4 example…
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Darcy, an absolutely awful man, is of no concern to u. And I would say it is u, will all this matchmaking business, who's the silly one.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Calm down, dear. It’s just that I know Darcy is quite keen on u and u mustn't be so quick to pass on such an offer.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Emma, u don't know what ur talking about. Darcy is nothing but a snob.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Not a snob at all! Darcy is a man of refined taste & character, the heir to a sizable fortune, AND he wants u! If u ask me ur CRAZY not to accept his offer straight away...
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Unlike u, dear, there are more important things to me than society and fortune. The man I marry must appreciate that & if no such man presents himself, I will be perfectly content to remain unmarried.
Emma: @LizzyB – That sort of talk sounds all too modern, if u ask me. A suitable marriage prospect is what a girl works 2ward. It is why she is educated and presented in2 society.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Educated all for the purpose of pleasing suitors? What about the betterment of the mind & the value of literature and art and music? I do not read 4 a man but 4 myself!
Emma: @LizzyB – That’s all well and good, Lizzy, but Darcy can hardly be expected to put up with such selfishness in his future wife. U have to give a little, no?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – I am more than willing to give if he will. Marriage must be a compromise b/w equals, not tenure in servitude 4 a wife to her husband.
Emma: @LizzyB – Too progressive, Lizzy. Scale back.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – But its not just Darcy’s antiquated expectations of a wife -- he is also insufferably cold, far quick to judge and severely lacks a sense of humor and playfulness. I do contend I have never seen him smile but once!
Emma: @LizzyB – No, he’s just guarded. U can’t expect such a dignified man to reveal all facets of personality without coaxing – wit and charm and pride and intelligence, all at once? No, and Darcy is accustomed to classless advances from young woman given his wealth -- u can hardly blame him 4 being suspect of new acquaintances.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – That sounds fair enough, I suppose.
Emma: @LizzyB – Ah! I detect a change of heart in that tweet…
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper – Not so hasty, Emma. If Darcy is capable of warmth and compassion, it has yet 2 be revealed 2 me.
Conor's fan fiction grammar revised
My senses, all of them start to dim and fuzz around the edges, like when you burn the sides of a letter to make it look old fashioned. This means I'm about to see something, usually something bad. But I guess I shouldn't be expecting the worst even when the worst is usually logically expected these days. Ok, here we go.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touch I was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am I seeing this?
Then I remember, 'it's what I do.' Draw. Why did I not think of this straight away, always draw what you see Alice, I try to remind myself of this every time. Reaching for the nearest pad of bland hotel notepad I start to scrawl down what I'm seeing. "What are you doing love?" I completely forgot Jasper was here, no time to explain. Draw. As the vision starts to fade ever so slightly, releasing my head from the vice that held it so tightly over the last few seconds the paper comes into view, slipping through my retina as the photographic image fades from my sight, replaced by a surprisingly accurate translation kneaded into the paper in front of me with the pen I am holding. The pen has started to crack under the pressure with which I was holding it. Sweat slides down the back of my neck creating a film that holds my shirt to my back against its will.
Jasper. "I think if know where James is. He is here in Phoenix Jasper, here in Phoenix." "In that case we need to make sure Bella stays close by." How can Jasper be so calm? Maybe it’s just the adrenaline from my 'vision' but calm is the last feeling that my mind could comprehend, and then I feel it. Jasper must have sensed my mood. Slowly my pulse slows, heart beat fades back to a normal pace and the last grip of the vice is finally undone. This is one of the many things that makes loving Jasper so easy and complete, his ability to set a mood upon an entire room, I truly could not suffer eternity without him. Then Jasper suddenly utters the worst possible scenario for this moment. "Alice, where is Bella." "Shit."
She’s gone. This is not good at all; her scent is still lingering though.
Then all of a sudden who should walk through the door holding a fucking soda? Bella. "Where have you been? We were panicking, look I've had a vision, do you recognize this place." Bella's face dropped and her brow creased. "This is my old ballet studio. It’s just down the road." "And that’s where James is." Bella jumped, she had obviously forgotten Jasper was here.
A phone rings, it's Edward for Bella. They go off into the bedroom and talk. I have to think about how I'm going to explain this to Edward, he thought she would be safe here, there is no way he won't over react, is it even over reacting? Why would James, no how would James know about Bella's old studio, unless. "Jasper, we have to make sure Bella's mom is ok. Think about it. How else would James know about the studio?" "Yeah but she’s out of town, right?" This is true technically she shouldn't be back for weeks, the stress is nearly too much.
Bella has finished talking with Edward. My turn. "Hey there brother" I say sarcastically, that joke never gets old. "What is it Alice?" Damn he just knows, every time. "Well, see, James might be.......kind of" "OUT WITH IT ALICE" "well kind of.......here in Phoenix, at Bella's old ballet studio." "................" "We think he is going to try and lure her there, but we have it all under control." "I'm on the NEXT flight, why did you not call me immediately??" "Chill out Edward, I'm still coming down from my 'vision' you were the first person I was going to call, and you don't need to come down here, everything is fine." 'Click.'
"He's coming, probably with Carlisle and Emmet." "Figures, Emmet can never resist a good fight." "Jasper this is hardly the time to be amping for a fight." "Then when is Alice?" "Uhhh excuse me, could someone please fill me in?" oh Bella, that's right. "Edward and the other boys are coming down; he's blown this whole thing out of proportion." "I wish he would do what best for him and stop babying me." "Bella, it’s only cause he cares about you more than anyone that has ever existed." "I know." Of course she knows, how could you not Edward is so god dam smitten with her even I'm a little grossed out.
It's morning already? Ha-ha Bella snores, cute. Guess we should wake her; the others will be at the airport around midday. It’s annoying how due to Edwards’s stubbornness we have to try to maneuver during the daytime, time to put on the big, heavy, ugly clothes.
"Jasper, how are we going to do this?" "Let’s go and talk to the front desk and see if we can't get our car parked around back, it'll be a start." "Good idea love, let’s go, we can wake Bella when we get back."
Bella wakes at the sound of the door sliding shut and the lock clicking quickly into place, or so she thought. It was really her phone vibrating under the night worn pillow. "Hello??" "Bella? Bella?"
"Calm down mom." "Mom?" "Bella, your mother is safe as long as you do me this one tiny little favor.........
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touch I was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am I seeing this?
Then I remember, 'it's what I do.' Draw. Why did I not think of this straight away, always draw what you see Alice, I try to remind myself of this every time. Reaching for the nearest pad of bland hotel notepad I start to scrawl down what I'm seeing. "What are you doing love?" I completely forgot Jasper was here, no time to explain. Draw. As the vision starts to fade ever so slightly, releasing my head from the vice that held it so tightly over the last few seconds the paper comes into view, slipping through my retina as the photographic image fades from my sight, replaced by a surprisingly accurate translation kneaded into the paper in front of me with the pen I am holding. The pen has started to crack under the pressure with which I was holding it. Sweat slides down the back of my neck creating a film that holds my shirt to my back against its will.
Jasper. "I think if know where James is. He is here in Phoenix Jasper, here in Phoenix." "In that case we need to make sure Bella stays close by." How can Jasper be so calm? Maybe it’s just the adrenaline from my 'vision' but calm is the last feeling that my mind could comprehend, and then I feel it. Jasper must have sensed my mood. Slowly my pulse slows, heart beat fades back to a normal pace and the last grip of the vice is finally undone. This is one of the many things that makes loving Jasper so easy and complete, his ability to set a mood upon an entire room, I truly could not suffer eternity without him. Then Jasper suddenly utters the worst possible scenario for this moment. "Alice, where is Bella." "Shit."
She’s gone. This is not good at all; her scent is still lingering though.
Then all of a sudden who should walk through the door holding a fucking soda? Bella. "Where have you been? We were panicking, look I've had a vision, do you recognize this place." Bella's face dropped and her brow creased. "This is my old ballet studio. It’s just down the road." "And that’s where James is." Bella jumped, she had obviously forgotten Jasper was here.
A phone rings, it's Edward for Bella. They go off into the bedroom and talk. I have to think about how I'm going to explain this to Edward, he thought she would be safe here, there is no way he won't over react, is it even over reacting? Why would James, no how would James know about Bella's old studio, unless. "Jasper, we have to make sure Bella's mom is ok. Think about it. How else would James know about the studio?" "Yeah but she’s out of town, right?" This is true technically she shouldn't be back for weeks, the stress is nearly too much.
Bella has finished talking with Edward. My turn. "Hey there brother" I say sarcastically, that joke never gets old. "What is it Alice?" Damn he just knows, every time. "Well, see, James might be.......kind of" "OUT WITH IT ALICE" "well kind of.......here in Phoenix, at Bella's old ballet studio." "................" "We think he is going to try and lure her there, but we have it all under control." "I'm on the NEXT flight, why did you not call me immediately??" "Chill out Edward, I'm still coming down from my 'vision' you were the first person I was going to call, and you don't need to come down here, everything is fine." 'Click.'
"He's coming, probably with Carlisle and Emmet." "Figures, Emmet can never resist a good fight." "Jasper this is hardly the time to be amping for a fight." "Then when is Alice?" "Uhhh excuse me, could someone please fill me in?" oh Bella, that's right. "Edward and the other boys are coming down; he's blown this whole thing out of proportion." "I wish he would do what best for him and stop babying me." "Bella, it’s only cause he cares about you more than anyone that has ever existed." "I know." Of course she knows, how could you not Edward is so god dam smitten with her even I'm a little grossed out.
It's morning already? Ha-ha Bella snores, cute. Guess we should wake her; the others will be at the airport around midday. It’s annoying how due to Edwards’s stubbornness we have to try to maneuver during the daytime, time to put on the big, heavy, ugly clothes.
"Jasper, how are we going to do this?" "Let’s go and talk to the front desk and see if we can't get our car parked around back, it'll be a start." "Good idea love, let’s go, we can wake Bella when we get back."
Bella wakes at the sound of the door sliding shut and the lock clicking quickly into place, or so she thought. It was really her phone vibrating under the night worn pillow. "Hello??" "Bella? Bella?"
"Calm down mom." "Mom?" "Bella, your mother is safe as long as you do me this one tiny little favor.........
Daniel Twilight FINAL DRAFT
Fan fiction
Twilight
Below is a small blurb of my idea
Set after the events of the first book in the Twilight series Bella Swan and Edward Cullen are finally together without any worry… or so they think. Since arriving back in Forks being nearly killed by a bloodthirsty Vampire, Bella has not been the same. ..
I have never feared for my own life before. But after coming so close to death recently at the hands of a hungry vampire, I have grown accustomed to the fact that one day, maybe not a long time from now, my life as I know it will be over. But for some reason, for the first time in my life that scared me.
A young girl stands on the edge of a cliff that looks out over the meandering ocean, the sky is grey, a man clad in a black jacket stands with her. She looks afraid, I close my eyes, only for a second, and when I open them she has gone. But the mysterious coat wearing figure stands tall in the same position looking out across the water.
That's when I wake up.
The same dream has been happening again and again since I returned to forks two short weeks ago. But it’s different from other dreams. It’s so clear and vivid. So clear I can touch the rocks I’m rested on high up on a rocky coastline. So vivid I can feel the bone chilling wind covering my body.
Who are the figures on the cliff face? What happened to the girl? Why is it so clear? And what’s it got to do with me? My mind is full of questions. But until I have answers I will not tell a soul, not even Edward.
My day started like any other day. I got dressed and went downstairs, like always Charlie was sitting in the same chair at the table reading the paper. I made some small talk about my plans for the day then left for school.
Edward was waiting in his usual place leaning agenised his shiny silver Volvo but something was different. His face was grim; his usual smirk that unfailingly mirrors mine when I see him was missing. I instantly knew something was wrong. My heart sank inside me as I sheepishly walked over to meet him, his golden eyes gazing thoughtfully into mine like he was trying to read my mind. I opened my mouth to speak but he beat me to it.
“Bella, I need to talk to you, it can’t wait.”
His tone was bleak, and I could sense that he had something very serious to tell me. He opened the passenger door of his car and I quickly got in, he was already in the car when I closed the door, his expression now colder than his skin. “Edward what is it your scaring me?” my voice raw with fear.
He ignored me as he started the car; my heart sank as we drove off at speed away from Forks.
“What are you doing?”I could not hide my fear.
“You are sick Bella, I know what you’re thinking, I can hear your thoughts as clear as any other person, and that can only mean one thing. Some of the venom from the vampire attack is still in your system”
“How could that happen? You sucked it all out?” I spoke at twice my normal pace.
“There is always a chance that some of the venom can remain, you are ok for now but eventually the chromosomes will multiply and overpower your system and you will die.
My mind couldn’t comprehend what it had just heard. Could this explain my dreams? I tried to speak but I couldn’t.
“There is only one way to stop this from happening” as Edward spoke the car came to a stop, I looked up and I could see water. We appeared to be at some sort of scenic tourist lookout, but the view I had seen before....
Edward slowly got out of the car and started walking toward the cliff as he walked he put on a long jet black jacket and pulled the hood over his head, he gestured for me to follow him. I hesitated but complied.
He came to a stop at only a few feet from the edge, I stood a safe distance behind. For the first time since I meet Edward I was afraid of him. He seemed completely different, and he looked at me like I was an entirely different person.
“Bella the only way we can stop the venom from killing you is to stop your heart, so Carlyle can operate.” You need to drown so it looks like a harmless accident.”
It was clear now; the girl in my dreams was me. I mustered up the little energy I had left and spoke. “You can’t be serious, how can you be sure this will work?”
“Trust me” he said as he took my hand and turned me around so my back faced the water. I didn’t struggle, for some strange reason the touch of his icy hand suddenly calmed me. I closed my eyes expecting the worsted. “I love you Bella” he whispered. I opened my eyes just in time to catch a last glimpse of his perfect face as my body slipped from his embrace and fell towards the water below.
My mind went blank before I hit the water.
The soothing image of Edwards face remained in my mind, it was the first thing I laid my eyes on when I awoke in my own warm bed.
I had no energy but I had to say something to him. “I will always trust you Edward.”
He smiled his trademark smile, and with that I closed my eyes because I knew everything would be ok.
Please let me know what you guys think so i can make some final changes!! Be honest!!
Twilight
Below is a small blurb of my idea
Set after the events of the first book in the Twilight series Bella Swan and Edward Cullen are finally together without any worry… or so they think. Since arriving back in Forks being nearly killed by a bloodthirsty Vampire, Bella has not been the same. ..
I have never feared for my own life before. But after coming so close to death recently at the hands of a hungry vampire, I have grown accustomed to the fact that one day, maybe not a long time from now, my life as I know it will be over. But for some reason, for the first time in my life that scared me.
A young girl stands on the edge of a cliff that looks out over the meandering ocean, the sky is grey, a man clad in a black jacket stands with her. She looks afraid, I close my eyes, only for a second, and when I open them she has gone. But the mysterious coat wearing figure stands tall in the same position looking out across the water.
That's when I wake up.
The same dream has been happening again and again since I returned to forks two short weeks ago. But it’s different from other dreams. It’s so clear and vivid. So clear I can touch the rocks I’m rested on high up on a rocky coastline. So vivid I can feel the bone chilling wind covering my body.
Who are the figures on the cliff face? What happened to the girl? Why is it so clear? And what’s it got to do with me? My mind is full of questions. But until I have answers I will not tell a soul, not even Edward.
My day started like any other day. I got dressed and went downstairs, like always Charlie was sitting in the same chair at the table reading the paper. I made some small talk about my plans for the day then left for school.
Edward was waiting in his usual place leaning agenised his shiny silver Volvo but something was different. His face was grim; his usual smirk that unfailingly mirrors mine when I see him was missing. I instantly knew something was wrong. My heart sank inside me as I sheepishly walked over to meet him, his golden eyes gazing thoughtfully into mine like he was trying to read my mind. I opened my mouth to speak but he beat me to it.
“Bella, I need to talk to you, it can’t wait.”
His tone was bleak, and I could sense that he had something very serious to tell me. He opened the passenger door of his car and I quickly got in, he was already in the car when I closed the door, his expression now colder than his skin. “Edward what is it your scaring me?” my voice raw with fear.
He ignored me as he started the car; my heart sank as we drove off at speed away from Forks.
“What are you doing?”I could not hide my fear.
“You are sick Bella, I know what you’re thinking, I can hear your thoughts as clear as any other person, and that can only mean one thing. Some of the venom from the vampire attack is still in your system”
“How could that happen? You sucked it all out?” I spoke at twice my normal pace.
“There is always a chance that some of the venom can remain, you are ok for now but eventually the chromosomes will multiply and overpower your system and you will die.
My mind couldn’t comprehend what it had just heard. Could this explain my dreams? I tried to speak but I couldn’t.
“There is only one way to stop this from happening” as Edward spoke the car came to a stop, I looked up and I could see water. We appeared to be at some sort of scenic tourist lookout, but the view I had seen before....
Edward slowly got out of the car and started walking toward the cliff as he walked he put on a long jet black jacket and pulled the hood over his head, he gestured for me to follow him. I hesitated but complied.
He came to a stop at only a few feet from the edge, I stood a safe distance behind. For the first time since I meet Edward I was afraid of him. He seemed completely different, and he looked at me like I was an entirely different person.
“Bella the only way we can stop the venom from killing you is to stop your heart, so Carlyle can operate.” You need to drown so it looks like a harmless accident.”
It was clear now; the girl in my dreams was me. I mustered up the little energy I had left and spoke. “You can’t be serious, how can you be sure this will work?”
“Trust me” he said as he took my hand and turned me around so my back faced the water. I didn’t struggle, for some strange reason the touch of his icy hand suddenly calmed me. I closed my eyes expecting the worsted. “I love you Bella” he whispered. I opened my eyes just in time to catch a last glimpse of his perfect face as my body slipped from his embrace and fell towards the water below.
My mind went blank before I hit the water.
The soothing image of Edwards face remained in my mind, it was the first thing I laid my eyes on when I awoke in my own warm bed.
I had no energy but I had to say something to him. “I will always trust you Edward.”
He smiled his trademark smile, and with that I closed my eyes because I knew everything would be ok.
Please let me know what you guys think so i can make some final changes!! Be honest!!
Thursday, August 6, 2009
ok heres what i hope to be my final draft comments pending.
My senses, all of them start to dim and fuzz around the edges, like when you burn the sides of a letter to make it look old fashioned. This means I'm about to see something, usually something bad. But i guess i shouldn't be expecting the worst even when the worst is usually logically expected these days. Ok, here we go.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touch i was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am i seeing this?
Then i remember, 'it's what i do.' Draw. Why did i not think of this straight away, always draw what you see Alice, I try to remind myself of this every time. Reaching for the nearest pad of bland hotel notepad I start to scrawl down what I'm seeing. "What are you doing love?" I completely forgot Jasper was here, no time to explain. Draw. As the vision starts to fade ever so slightly, releasing my head from the vice that held it so tightly over the last few seconds the paper comes into view, slipping through my retina as the photographic image fades from my sight, replaced by a surprisingly accurate translation kneaded into the paper in front of me with the pen I am holding. The pen has started to crack under the pressure with which i was holding it. Sweat slides down the back of my neck creating a film that holds my shirt to my back against it's will.
Jasper. "I think i know where James is. He is here in Phoenix Jasper, here in Phoenix." "In that case we need to make sure Bella stays close by." How can Jasper be so calm? Maybe its just the adrenaline from my 'vision' but calm is the last feeling that my mind could comprehend, then i feel it. Jasper must have sensed my mood. Slowly my pulse slows, heart beat fades back to a normal pace and the last grip of the vice is finally undone. This is one of the many things that makes loving Jasper so easy and complete, his ability to set a mood upon an entire room, I truly could not suffer eternity without him. Then Jasper suddenly utters the worst possible scenario for this moment. "Alice, where is Bella." "Shit."
Shes gone. This is not good at all, her scent is still lingering though.
Then all of a sudden who should walk through the door holding a fucking soda? Bella. "Where have you been? We were panicking, look I've had a vision, do you recognize this place." Bella's face dropped and her brow creased. "This is my old ballet studio. Its just down the road." "And thats where James is." Bella jumped, she had obviously forgotten Jasper was here.
A phone rings, it's Edward for Bella. They go off into the bedroom and talk. I have to thin about how I'm going to explain this to Edward, he thought she would be safe here, there is no way he won't over react, is it even over reacting? Why would James, no how would James know about Bella's old studio, unless. "Jasper,we have to make sure Bella's mom is ok. Think about it, how else would James know about the studio." "Yeah but shes out of town, right?" This is true technically she shouldn't be back for weeks, the stress is nearly too much.
Bella has finished talking with Edward. My turn. "Hey there brother" i say sarcastically, that joke never gets old. "What is it Alice?" Damn he just knows, every time. "Well see, James might be.......kind of" "OUT WITH IT ALICE" "well kind of.......here in Phoenix, at Bella's old ballet studio." "................" "We think he is going to try and lure her there, but we have it all under control." "I'm on the NEXT flight, why did you not call me immediately??" "Chill out Edward, I'm still coming down from my 'vision' you were the first person i was going to call, and you don't need to come down here, everything is fine." 'Click.'
"He's coming. Probably with Carlisle and Emmet." "Figures, Emmet can never resist a good fight." "Jasper this is hardly the time to be amping for a fight." "Then when is Alice?" "uhhh excuse me, could someone please fill me in?" oh Bella, that's right. "Edward and the other boys are coming down, he's blown this whole thing out of proportion." "I wish he would do what best for him and stop babying me." "Bella, its only cause he cares about you more than anyone that has ever existed." "I know." Of course she knows, how could you not Edward is so goddam smitten with her even I'm a little grosed out.
It's morning already? Ha-ha Bella snores, cute. Guess we should wake her the others will be at the airport around midday. Its annoying how due to Edwards stubbourness we have to try to manuver during the daytime, time to put on the big, heavy, ugly clothes.
"Jasper, how are we going to do this?" "Lets go and talk to the front desk and see if we can't get our car parked around back, it'll be a start." "Good idea love, lets go, we can wake Bella when we get back."
Bella wakes at the sound of the door sliding shut and the lock clicking quickly into place, or so she thought. It was really her phone vibrating under the night worn pillow. "Hello??" "Bella? Bella?"
"Calm down mom." "Mom?" "Bella, your mother is safe as long as you do me this one tiny little favour........."
ok so this is basically my finsihed draft, needs to be gone over with grammar and all that etc etc.
thought id leave the outcome hanging in my story seeing as if youve read the book you know how it goes down.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touch i was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am i seeing this?
Then i remember, 'it's what i do.' Draw. Why did i not think of this straight away, always draw what you see Alice, I try to remind myself of this every time. Reaching for the nearest pad of bland hotel notepad I start to scrawl down what I'm seeing. "What are you doing love?" I completely forgot Jasper was here, no time to explain. Draw. As the vision starts to fade ever so slightly, releasing my head from the vice that held it so tightly over the last few seconds the paper comes into view, slipping through my retina as the photographic image fades from my sight, replaced by a surprisingly accurate translation kneaded into the paper in front of me with the pen I am holding. The pen has started to crack under the pressure with which i was holding it. Sweat slides down the back of my neck creating a film that holds my shirt to my back against it's will.
Jasper. "I think i know where James is. He is here in Phoenix Jasper, here in Phoenix." "In that case we need to make sure Bella stays close by." How can Jasper be so calm? Maybe its just the adrenaline from my 'vision' but calm is the last feeling that my mind could comprehend, then i feel it. Jasper must have sensed my mood. Slowly my pulse slows, heart beat fades back to a normal pace and the last grip of the vice is finally undone. This is one of the many things that makes loving Jasper so easy and complete, his ability to set a mood upon an entire room, I truly could not suffer eternity without him. Then Jasper suddenly utters the worst possible scenario for this moment. "Alice, where is Bella." "Shit."
Shes gone. This is not good at all, her scent is still lingering though.
Then all of a sudden who should walk through the door holding a fucking soda? Bella. "Where have you been? We were panicking, look I've had a vision, do you recognize this place." Bella's face dropped and her brow creased. "This is my old ballet studio. Its just down the road." "And thats where James is." Bella jumped, she had obviously forgotten Jasper was here.
A phone rings, it's Edward for Bella. They go off into the bedroom and talk. I have to thin about how I'm going to explain this to Edward, he thought she would be safe here, there is no way he won't over react, is it even over reacting? Why would James, no how would James know about Bella's old studio, unless. "Jasper,we have to make sure Bella's mom is ok. Think about it, how else would James know about the studio." "Yeah but shes out of town, right?" This is true technically she shouldn't be back for weeks, the stress is nearly too much.
Bella has finished talking with Edward. My turn. "Hey there brother" i say sarcastically, that joke never gets old. "What is it Alice?" Damn he just knows, every time. "Well see, James might be.......kind of" "OUT WITH IT ALICE" "well kind of.......here in Phoenix, at Bella's old ballet studio." "................" "We think he is going to try and lure her there, but we have it all under control." "I'm on the NEXT flight, why did you not call me immediately??" "Chill out Edward, I'm still coming down from my 'vision' you were the first person i was going to call, and you don't need to come down here, everything is fine." 'Click.'
"He's coming. Probably with Carlisle and Emmet." "Figures, Emmet can never resist a good fight." "Jasper this is hardly the time to be amping for a fight." "Then when is Alice?" "uhhh excuse me, could someone please fill me in?" oh Bella, that's right. "Edward and the other boys are coming down, he's blown this whole thing out of proportion." "I wish he would do what best for him and stop babying me." "Bella, its only cause he cares about you more than anyone that has ever existed." "I know." Of course she knows, how could you not Edward is so goddam smitten with her even I'm a little grosed out.
It's morning already? Ha-ha Bella snores, cute. Guess we should wake her the others will be at the airport around midday. Its annoying how due to Edwards stubbourness we have to try to manuver during the daytime, time to put on the big, heavy, ugly clothes.
"Jasper, how are we going to do this?" "Lets go and talk to the front desk and see if we can't get our car parked around back, it'll be a start." "Good idea love, lets go, we can wake Bella when we get back."
Bella wakes at the sound of the door sliding shut and the lock clicking quickly into place, or so she thought. It was really her phone vibrating under the night worn pillow. "Hello??" "Bella? Bella?"
"Calm down mom." "Mom?" "Bella, your mother is safe as long as you do me this one tiny little favour........."
ok so this is basically my finsihed draft, needs to be gone over with grammar and all that etc etc.
thought id leave the outcome hanging in my story seeing as if youve read the book you know how it goes down.
Deltora Quest, Final Fantasy & Vampiress Sebielina...My complete & Final Draft.(2009)
Deltora Quest, Final Fantasy, & Sebielina Saiya. Complete & Final Draft...
Ok, so this is the final draft of my FanFic.
I have decided to infuse three mediums as my Fanfiction they are Deltora Quest (Book) Cloud, of Midgar (Final Fantasy) and Sebielina Saiya, Vampire Princess of the Daark Forests. Transylvania. (My own character)
Many years have past since the disappearance of the evil tyrant Shadow Lord.
And so this story begins...As the night sky descends to allow in a new day, Leif is surprised to see a huge cloud dust in the distant heading for the castle at a speed that he has not seen in the kingdom of Deltora.He calls to Doom, his most trusted confidante.
"Doom, come quickly!" calls Leif, with panic in his voice.
Doom, bursts through the door with his sword at the ready to find the King alone. Doom quickly scans the room, he looks to Leif with a look of bewilderment.
"What has happened?" asks Doom.
"We have company." replies Leif. he turns to look out the window pointing to a hugh dust cloud in the distance, heading towards the castle at a rapid speed.
"What can it be?" asks Doom.
"I do not know, but we must ready ourselves until we know what they want we must treat them as an enemy." ordered Leif.
Lief hears the warning bells ringing. He hears Barda shouting orders, and heavy feet thudding to the Main court yard.
His beloved Jasmine, envelopes his thoughts he is also glad that she is in Tora preparing for the Delivery of their first child. But the noise and shouting breaks his concentration.
He makes his way down the stairs towards the main entrance of the castle, he thinks that the best thing would be too first greet the strangers with courtesy and see what happens from there.
Leif sees a strange looking black wagon without horses entering the courtyard then it suddenly stops. Barda gives the order to stand ready. An eerie silence echos throughout the courtyard.
The anticipation has everyone on edge.
Every weapon in Deltora is pointed directly on the Black shiny covered wagon.
"To the driver of the black wagon come out now!" Commands Leif.
(Silence)
One side of the wagon rises upwards, a young man about the same age as Leif exits. Leif, knows that this stranger is not of any of the tribes in the Kingdom of Deltora, so hesitantly he and Doom make their way towards the stranger.
"Greetings...I am King Leif of Deltora, who may you be stranger and what is your purpose in Deltora?" Asks Leif.
The stranger looks to Leif and what almost sounds like a whisper he speaks.
"I greet you with Honour King Leif of Deltora, my name is Cloud, i reign from Midgar." replies Cloud.
Before Cloud continues he is joined by his female companion, she glides to his side as if walking on air, she is dressed all in black from head to toe. The only thing that can be seen is a small piece of her hair which is a red colour with a hue of pink the same colour as a Deltora sunset.
Ok, so this is the final draft of my FanFic.
I have decided to infuse three mediums as my Fanfiction they are Deltora Quest (Book) Cloud, of Midgar (Final Fantasy) and Sebielina Saiya, Vampire Princess of the Daark Forests. Transylvania. (My own character)
Many years have past since the disappearance of the evil tyrant Shadow Lord.
And so this story begins...As the night sky descends to allow in a new day, Leif is surprised to see a huge cloud dust in the distant heading for the castle at a speed that he has not seen in the kingdom of Deltora.He calls to Doom, his most trusted confidante.
"Doom, come quickly!" calls Leif, with panic in his voice.
Doom, bursts through the door with his sword at the ready to find the King alone. Doom quickly scans the room, he looks to Leif with a look of bewilderment.
"What has happened?" asks Doom.
"We have company." replies Leif. he turns to look out the window pointing to a hugh dust cloud in the distance, heading towards the castle at a rapid speed.
"What can it be?" asks Doom.
"I do not know, but we must ready ourselves until we know what they want we must treat them as an enemy." ordered Leif.
Lief hears the warning bells ringing. He hears Barda shouting orders, and heavy feet thudding to the Main court yard.
His beloved Jasmine, envelopes his thoughts he is also glad that she is in Tora preparing for the Delivery of their first child. But the noise and shouting breaks his concentration.
He makes his way down the stairs towards the main entrance of the castle, he thinks that the best thing would be too first greet the strangers with courtesy and see what happens from there.
Leif sees a strange looking black wagon without horses entering the courtyard then it suddenly stops. Barda gives the order to stand ready. An eerie silence echos throughout the courtyard.
The anticipation has everyone on edge.
Every weapon in Deltora is pointed directly on the Black shiny covered wagon.
"To the driver of the black wagon come out now!" Commands Leif.
(Silence)
One side of the wagon rises upwards, a young man about the same age as Leif exits. Leif, knows that this stranger is not of any of the tribes in the Kingdom of Deltora, so hesitantly he and Doom make their way towards the stranger.
"Greetings...I am King Leif of Deltora, who may you be stranger and what is your purpose in Deltora?" Asks Leif.
The stranger looks to Leif and what almost sounds like a whisper he speaks.
"I greet you with Honour King Leif of Deltora, my name is Cloud, i reign from Midgar." replies Cloud.
Before Cloud continues he is joined by his female companion, she glides to his side as if walking on air, she is dressed all in black from head to toe. The only thing that can be seen is a small piece of her hair which is a red colour with a hue of pink the same colour as a Deltora sunset.
Leif for a brief moment captures a look at her eyes they almost look like they are on fire. He finds hard to look away, but the voice of Cloud, brings his thoughts back into reality.
"This lovely creature is Princess Sebielina Saiya, of the Daark Forests."
"Why have you come to Deltora?" asks Leif.
Cloud tells Leif of a evil that has entered the worlds of Cloud and Sebielina, what they have discovered about the their enemy is that it came from Deltora. Cloud continues to tell of the destruction and slaughter that has befallen both their worlds and the purpose the are in Deltora is to find a way of destroying the evil.
"Who is this enemy that is destroying your worlds, and how does that involve the kingdom of Deltora?" asks Leif.
"He goes by the name of the Shadow Lord, is he known to you?" replies Cloud.
Hearing the name shocks Leif, he feels his lip tighten, but he tries not to react to the name. he wonders to himself should he admit that their enemy was once an enemy of Deltora. Barda and Doom look to Leif for direction. He looks to his most trusted friends then to the Cloud and Sebielina, but his mind is obviously with Jasmine. He begins to speak.
"It is clear you have journeyed far, please come rest, eat and drink and we shall discuss this problem all in good time." suggests Leif.
"What have you decided to do my friend?" whispers Doom.
"I am not sure yet, but whatever i decide it will be for the well-being of Deltora."
http://www.square-enix-usa.com/dvd/ff7ac/ R*_*
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Wednesday, August 5, 2009
claire's first draft of twilight fanfic
Iwrite: Twilight fan fic draft.
Edward disappears on a hunting trip. Everyone is worried because Alice didn’t see this happening. The Cullens go looking for him and leave Bella in the care of Jacob and the wolves.
Bella turns to Jacob for comfort. Sometime passes (Cullens are still trying to find Edward) Jacob falls in love with Bella, after while Bella gives into Jacobs advances and they become a couple.
After about 4 months Edward suddenly arrives back in Forks and rushes to see Bella only to find that she is with Jacob and that she is pregnant.
But where has Edward been? Why couldn’t the Cullens find him? Why didn’t Alice see him leaving? What is going to happen when Bella sees Edward? Who will she choose?
He always hated leaving me, and I hated him leaving too, but I could see the thirst in his eyes. It was the usual façade of hiking on the weekend. Edward was going alone this time, but he said he would be back as soon as he could.
Alice and I were going to have a sleep over. I dreaded these, it was always so tiring being her Barbie doll to dress up and put make up on.
“Be safe, try not to hurt yourself while I’m gone.” Edward said with a smirk on his face.
“I’ll do my best.” I said returning his smirk.
With a quick but passionate kiss he was gone. And I was on my way to Alice’s for our sleep over. When I arrived Alice was at the front door waiting for me with an excited smile across her face.
“Hi Bella!”
“Hey Alice, so what’s the plan for tonight?” I said hesitantly, hoping it wouldn’t be too painful.
“I thought we could paint our nails and give each other facials.”
“Hmm sure!” I said trying to hide my discomfort; Alice knows I’m not one for girlie things.
Tuesday, August 4, 2009
twilight esmes pov
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5087842/2/As_I_Lay_Dying
this is quite cool it sort of follows when esme was 'turned' short but sweeet.
this is quite cool it sort of follows when esme was 'turned' short but sweeet.
Fanfic First Draft
This is a fanfic combining Austen's Emma and Pride and Prejudice. It is a conversation between Emma Woodhouse and Elizabeth Bennet, all done through Twitter. Prior to each other’s respective marriages, Emma counsels Lizzy on how she must handle the situation with Mr. Darcy. Emma, the consummate match-maker, is full of advice for headstrong Lizzy, who brushes off all of Emma’s directions.
Emma: @lizzyB -- Lizzy, dear, heard ur having troubles of the romantic sort. U know how I do love playing matchmaker… care 2 talk?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- No, thanx, don’t think I require ur gift of matching. I'm sure you have ur hands full w/ that poor Harriet Smith.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Harriet is a lovely girl & w/ my help will be married in no time.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Yes, as I said, poor Harriet Smith...
Emma: @LizzyB -- Don’t be silly. U know, not everyone is as hopeless as u on the subject of marriage. Mr. Darcy, 4 example…
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Mr. Darcy, an absolutely awful man, is of no concern to u. And I would say it is u, will all this matchmaking business, who's the silly one.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Calm down, dear. It’s just that I know Darcy is quite keen on u. U mustn't be so quick to pass on such an offer.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Emma, u don't know what ur talking about. Darcy is nothing but a snob.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Not a snob at all! Darcy is a man of refined taste & character, the heir to a sizable fortune, AND he wants u! If u ask me you’d be CRAZY not to accept his offer straight away...
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Unlike u, dear, there are more important things to me than society and fortune. The man I marry must appreciate that & if no such man presents himself, I will be perfectly content to remain unmarried.
Emma: @lizzyB -- Lizzy, dear, heard ur having troubles of the romantic sort. U know how I do love playing matchmaker… care 2 talk?
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- No, thanx, don’t think I require ur gift of matching. I'm sure you have ur hands full w/ that poor Harriet Smith.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Harriet is a lovely girl & w/ my help will be married in no time.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Yes, as I said, poor Harriet Smith...
Emma: @LizzyB -- Don’t be silly. U know, not everyone is as hopeless as u on the subject of marriage. Mr. Darcy, 4 example…
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Mr. Darcy, an absolutely awful man, is of no concern to u. And I would say it is u, will all this matchmaking business, who's the silly one.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Calm down, dear. It’s just that I know Darcy is quite keen on u. U mustn't be so quick to pass on such an offer.
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Emma, u don't know what ur talking about. Darcy is nothing but a snob.
Emma: @LizzyB -- Not a snob at all! Darcy is a man of refined taste & character, the heir to a sizable fortune, AND he wants u! If u ask me you’d be CRAZY not to accept his offer straight away...
Elizabeth: @cupidslilhelper -- Unlike u, dear, there are more important things to me than society and fortune. The man I marry must appreciate that & if no such man presents himself, I will be perfectly content to remain unmarried.
dead set
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4955593/1/dead_set_destruction_of_our_lives
not badly written over all but has the feel of being written by someone quite young and immature, but probably cause it was. liked it all the same, some spelling was terrible, but im not one to talk.
not badly written over all but has the feel of being written by someone quite young and immature, but probably cause it was. liked it all the same, some spelling was terrible, but im not one to talk.
twin peaks fan fic
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4367223/1/Nothing_Broken_Nothing_Thrown
heres another 'link' im kinda doing this backwards huh. this one was alot better than the last ones the characters held true to the series and even though it was a spin off still held my attention.
heres another 'link' im kinda doing this backwards huh. this one was alot better than the last ones the characters held true to the series and even though it was a spin off still held my attention.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4704453/1/The_Black_Lodge_Where_No_Man_Has_Gone_Before
heres a link to a fan fic that mixes twin peaks by Lynch and star trek. i like the dialog between kurt and dale but its kind of a lame idea in my opinion as twin peaks was awesome on its own and shouldnt be messed with. otherwise well written if just a tad short.
heres a link to a fan fic that mixes twin peaks by Lynch and star trek. i like the dialog between kurt and dale but its kind of a lame idea in my opinion as twin peaks was awesome on its own and shouldnt be messed with. otherwise well written if just a tad short.
More Fanfic!! Dan Twilight.
BLURB
Set after the events of the first book in the Twilight series Bella Swan and Edward Cullen are finally together without any worry… or so they think. Since arriving back in Forks being nearly killed by a bloodthirsty Vampire, Bella has not been the same. ..
I have never feared for my own life before. I have never been scared of my life ending and the pain that goes with it. But after coming so close to death more than once in the past year, I have grown accustomed to the fact that one day, maybe not a long time from now, my life as I know it will be over. But for some reason, for the first time in my life that scared me. Not because I had goals or un finished business that I was eager to see through. I feared that I would miss out on the life that I now had in forks, a life that at one time I didn't cherish. A life with Edward.
A young girl lies bleeding and distressed on the edge of a cliff that looks out over the meandering ocean, the sky is grey, a man clad in what looks like a mink jacket stands over her. I can see this clearly but am too far away to help, my heart starts to beat faster than it would when I touch Edwards ice cold face, I am afraid. I close my eyes, only for a second, and when I open them she has gone. But the mysterious coat wearing figure stands tall in the same position looking out across the water.
That's when I wake up.
The same dream has been happening again and again since I returned to Forks two short weeks ago. But it’s different from other dreams. It’s so clear and vivid. So clear I can touch the sharp rocks I’m rested on high up on a rocky coastline. So vivid I can feel the bone chilling wind covering my body.
Who are the figures on the cliff face? What happened to the girl? How can a dream be so clear? And what has it got to do with me? My mind is full of questions. But until I have anwsers I will not tell a soul. Not even Edward...
Set after the events of the first book in the Twilight series Bella Swan and Edward Cullen are finally together without any worry… or so they think. Since arriving back in Forks being nearly killed by a bloodthirsty Vampire, Bella has not been the same. ..
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A young girl lies bleeding and distressed on the edge of a cliff that looks out over the meandering ocean, the sky is grey, a man clad in what looks like a mink jacket stands over her. I can see this clearly but am too far away to help, my heart starts to beat faster than it would when I touch Edwards ice cold face, I am afraid. I close my eyes, only for a second, and when I open them she has gone. But the mysterious coat wearing figure stands tall in the same position looking out across the water.
That's when I wake up.
The same dream has been happening again and again since I returned to Forks two short weeks ago. But it’s different from other dreams. It’s so clear and vivid. So clear I can touch the sharp rocks I’m rested on high up on a rocky coastline. So vivid I can feel the bone chilling wind covering my body.
Who are the figures on the cliff face? What happened to the girl? How can a dream be so clear? And what has it got to do with me? My mind is full of questions. But until I have anwsers I will not tell a soul. Not even Edward...
even more lulz
My senses, all of them start to dim and fuzz around the edges, like when you burn the sides of a letter to make it look old fashioned. This means I'm about to see something, usually something bad. But i guess i shouldn't be expecting the worst even when the worst is usually logically expected these days. Ok, here we go.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touch i was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am i seeing this?
Then i remember, 'it's what i do.' Draw. Why did i not think of this straight away, always draw what you see Alice, I try to remind myself of this every time. Reaching for the nearest pad of bland hotel notepad I start to scrawl down what I'm seeing. "What are you doing love?" I completely forgot Jasper was here, no time to explain. Draw. As the vision starts to fade ever so slightly, releasing my head from the vice that held it so tightly over the last few seconds the paper comes into view, slipping through my retina as the photographic image fades from my sight, replaced by a surprisingly accurate translation kneaded into the paper in front of me with the pen I am holding. The pen has started to crack under the pressure with which i was holding it. Sweat slides down the back of my neck creating a film that holds my shirt to my back against it's will.
Jasper. "I think i know where James is. He is here in Phoenix Jasper, here in Phoenix." "In that case we need to make sure Bella stays close by." How can Jasper be so calm? Maybe its just the adrenaline from my 'vision' but calm is the last feeling that my mind could comprehend, then i feel it. Jasper must have sensed my mood. Slowly my pulse slows, heart beat fades back to a normal pace and the last grip of the vice is finally undone. This is one of the many things that makes loving Jasper so easy and complete, his ability to set a mood upon an entire room, I truly could not suffer eternity without him. Then Jasper suddenly utters the worst possible scenario for this moment. "Alice, where is Bella." "Shit."
Shes gone. This is not good at all, her scent is still lingering though.
Then all of a sudden who should walk through the door holding a fucking soda? Bella. "Where have you been? We were panicking, look I've had a vision, do you recognize this place." Bella's face dropped and her brow creased. "This is my old ballet studio. Its just down the road." "And thats where James is." Bella jumped, she had obviously forgotten Jasper was here.
A phone rings, it's Edward for Bella. They go off into the bedroom and talk. I have to thin about how I'm going to explain this to Edward, he thought she would be safe here, there is no way he won't over react, is it even over reacting? Why would James, no how would James know about Bella's old studio, unless. "Jasper,we have to make sure Bella's mom is ok. Think about it, how else would James know about the studio." "Yeah but shes out of town, right?" This is true technically she shouldn't be back for weeks, the stress is nearly too much.
Bella has finished talking with Edward. My turn. "Hey there brother" i say sarcastically, that joke never gets old. "What is it Alice?" Damn he just knows, every time. "Well see, James might be.......kind of" "OUT WITH IT ALICE" "well kind of.......here in Phoenix, at Bella's old ballet studio." "................" "We think he is going to try and lure her there, but we have it all under control." "I'm on the NEXT flight, why did you not call me immediately??" "Chill out Edward, I'm still coming down from my 'vision' you were the first person i was going to call, and you don't need to come down here, everything is fine." 'Click.'
"He's coming. Probably with Carlisle and Emmet." "Figures, Emmet can never resist a good fight." "Jasper this is hardly the time to be amping for a fight." "Then when is Alice?" "uhhh excuse me, could someone please fill me in?" oh Bella, that's right. "Edward and the other boys are coming down, he's blown this whole thing out of proportion." "I wish he would do what best for him and stop babying me." "Bella, its only cause he cares about you more than anyone that has ever existed." "I know." Of course she knows, how could you not Edward is so goddam smitten with her even I'm a little grosed out.
It's morning already? Ha-ha Bella snores, cute. Guess we should wake her the others will be at the airport around midday. Its annoying how due to Edwards stubbourness we have to try to manuver during the daytime, time to put on the big, heavy, ugly clothes.
"Jasper, how are we going to do this?" "Lets go and talk to the front desk and see if we can't get our car parked around back, it'll be a start." "Good idea love, lets go, we can wake Bella when we get back."
Bella wakes at the sound of the door sliding shut and the lock clicking quickly into place, or so she thought. It was really her phone vibrating under the night worn pillow. "Hello??" "Bella? Bella?"
"Calm down mom." "Mom?" "Bella, your mother is safe as long as you do me this one tiny little favour........."
ok so this is basically my finsihed draft, needs to be gone over with grammar and all that etc etc.
thought id leave the outcome hanging in my story seeing as if youve read the book you know how it goes down.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touch i was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am i seeing this?
Then i remember, 'it's what i do.' Draw. Why did i not think of this straight away, always draw what you see Alice, I try to remind myself of this every time. Reaching for the nearest pad of bland hotel notepad I start to scrawl down what I'm seeing. "What are you doing love?" I completely forgot Jasper was here, no time to explain. Draw. As the vision starts to fade ever so slightly, releasing my head from the vice that held it so tightly over the last few seconds the paper comes into view, slipping through my retina as the photographic image fades from my sight, replaced by a surprisingly accurate translation kneaded into the paper in front of me with the pen I am holding. The pen has started to crack under the pressure with which i was holding it. Sweat slides down the back of my neck creating a film that holds my shirt to my back against it's will.
Jasper. "I think i know where James is. He is here in Phoenix Jasper, here in Phoenix." "In that case we need to make sure Bella stays close by." How can Jasper be so calm? Maybe its just the adrenaline from my 'vision' but calm is the last feeling that my mind could comprehend, then i feel it. Jasper must have sensed my mood. Slowly my pulse slows, heart beat fades back to a normal pace and the last grip of the vice is finally undone. This is one of the many things that makes loving Jasper so easy and complete, his ability to set a mood upon an entire room, I truly could not suffer eternity without him. Then Jasper suddenly utters the worst possible scenario for this moment. "Alice, where is Bella." "Shit."
Shes gone. This is not good at all, her scent is still lingering though.
Then all of a sudden who should walk through the door holding a fucking soda? Bella. "Where have you been? We were panicking, look I've had a vision, do you recognize this place." Bella's face dropped and her brow creased. "This is my old ballet studio. Its just down the road." "And thats where James is." Bella jumped, she had obviously forgotten Jasper was here.
A phone rings, it's Edward for Bella. They go off into the bedroom and talk. I have to thin about how I'm going to explain this to Edward, he thought she would be safe here, there is no way he won't over react, is it even over reacting? Why would James, no how would James know about Bella's old studio, unless. "Jasper,we have to make sure Bella's mom is ok. Think about it, how else would James know about the studio." "Yeah but shes out of town, right?" This is true technically she shouldn't be back for weeks, the stress is nearly too much.
Bella has finished talking with Edward. My turn. "Hey there brother" i say sarcastically, that joke never gets old. "What is it Alice?" Damn he just knows, every time. "Well see, James might be.......kind of" "OUT WITH IT ALICE" "well kind of.......here in Phoenix, at Bella's old ballet studio." "................" "We think he is going to try and lure her there, but we have it all under control." "I'm on the NEXT flight, why did you not call me immediately??" "Chill out Edward, I'm still coming down from my 'vision' you were the first person i was going to call, and you don't need to come down here, everything is fine." 'Click.'
"He's coming. Probably with Carlisle and Emmet." "Figures, Emmet can never resist a good fight." "Jasper this is hardly the time to be amping for a fight." "Then when is Alice?" "uhhh excuse me, could someone please fill me in?" oh Bella, that's right. "Edward and the other boys are coming down, he's blown this whole thing out of proportion." "I wish he would do what best for him and stop babying me." "Bella, its only cause he cares about you more than anyone that has ever existed." "I know." Of course she knows, how could you not Edward is so goddam smitten with her even I'm a little grosed out.
It's morning already? Ha-ha Bella snores, cute. Guess we should wake her the others will be at the airport around midday. Its annoying how due to Edwards stubbourness we have to try to manuver during the daytime, time to put on the big, heavy, ugly clothes.
"Jasper, how are we going to do this?" "Lets go and talk to the front desk and see if we can't get our car parked around back, it'll be a start." "Good idea love, lets go, we can wake Bella when we get back."
Bella wakes at the sound of the door sliding shut and the lock clicking quickly into place, or so she thought. It was really her phone vibrating under the night worn pillow. "Hello??" "Bella? Bella?"
"Calm down mom." "Mom?" "Bella, your mother is safe as long as you do me this one tiny little favour........."
ok so this is basically my finsihed draft, needs to be gone over with grammar and all that etc etc.
thought id leave the outcome hanging in my story seeing as if youve read the book you know how it goes down.
My Fanfic
Am working on a plan for my fanfic, which will be a combination of Emma and Pride and Prejudice. I want to do a conversation between Emma Woodhouse and Elizabeth Bennet (the main characters of each work), all done through Twitter (much more fun than standard quotes!).
Prior to each other’s respective marriages, Emma counsels Lizzy on how she must handle the situation with Mr. Darcy. Emma, the consummate match-maker, is full of advice for headstrong Lizzy, who brushes off all of Emma’s directions. And obviously this will have to be a modern fanfic -- no Twitter in Regency times.
Deltora, Final Fantasy & Sebielina Saiya
Deltora, Final Fantasy DVD, and Sebielina Saiya.I would like to infuse three mediums together they are Deltora Quest (Book) Cloud, from Final Fantasy (DVD & Computer Game). And Sebielina Saiya, Vampire Princess of the Dark Forests, Transylvania. (From my head).
Many years have past since the victory against the evil Tyrant the Shadow Lord.
So the story begins...As the night sky descends to allow in a new day, Leif is surprised to see a huge cloud dust in the distant heading for the castle at a speed that he has not seen in the kingdom of Deltora.
He calls to Doom, his most trusted confidante.
"Doom, come quickly!" shouts Leif!
Doom, bursts through the door with his sword at the ready to find the King standing in the chamber-room alone. He quickly glances around the room; he looks to the king with a bewildered look on his face.
"What has happened, Leif?" asks Doom with much confusion.
"I fear a new enemy has arrived in Deltora." replies Leif, with a dread look on his face.
"What is it you want monster!" hollers Leif to the all black shiny object.
The doors on a black 2022 Holden Sport sedan open and at the exact time the Kings heavily armed guards surround the entire castle rooftops and the bridge is slammed locked!
Leif looses his balance and stumbles backwards he realizes that a beautiful woman with porcelain white skin and light red hair is standing directly in front of him.
He gains his step and points his sword, but she disappears.
Leif is not sure at what he is seeing. "Are you a spirit?"
"My name is Cloud, i was born from PlayStation, but i reign from Final Fantasy.VII - Advent Children and this is Sebielina Saiya she is The Vampire Princess, of the Dark Forests."
Leif looks to his left to see Sebielina, gliding towards her companion.
She is clearly a witch, decides Leif.
"I am King Leif, of Deltora!"
"What is that black monster that spat you out?"
"Huh...That would be the Princesses wheels." said Cloud...He then realizes that he is speaking perfect English.
What has happened to my mother tongue?? Confused he stands back to gather his thoughts.
"Why have you come to Deltora?" asks Leif.
"Do you know something called the Shadow Lord?" asks Sebielina.
“What did you say!!" chokes Leif with a lump in his throat the size of The Wennbar.
"So you do know of it then, good! It has been killing many of my clan and the clan of the one who calls himself Cloud!" said Sebielina in her quiet and sweetly voice.
"We learnt that it came from a place called Deltora."
"You will come back with us to our worlds to help us kill this being!" stress Cloud and Sebielina.
So, will Leif and his compaions go to do battle or will he be glad to be rid of the Shadow Lord? Personally I think he will go, he does not appear to me to run away from a battle. What do you think? Final Fantasy website. http://www.square-enix-usa.com/dvd/ff7ac/ R*_*
Many years have past since the victory against the evil Tyrant the Shadow Lord.
So the story begins...As the night sky descends to allow in a new day, Leif is surprised to see a huge cloud dust in the distant heading for the castle at a speed that he has not seen in the kingdom of Deltora.
He calls to Doom, his most trusted confidante.
"Doom, come quickly!" shouts Leif!
Doom, bursts through the door with his sword at the ready to find the King standing in the chamber-room alone. He quickly glances around the room; he looks to the king with a bewildered look on his face.
"What has happened, Leif?" asks Doom with much confusion.
"I fear a new enemy has arrived in Deltora." replies Leif, with a dread look on his face.
"What is it you want monster!" hollers Leif to the all black shiny object.
The doors on a black 2022 Holden Sport sedan open and at the exact time the Kings heavily armed guards surround the entire castle rooftops and the bridge is slammed locked!
Leif looses his balance and stumbles backwards he realizes that a beautiful woman with porcelain white skin and light red hair is standing directly in front of him.
He gains his step and points his sword, but she disappears.
Leif is not sure at what he is seeing. "Are you a spirit?"
"My name is Cloud, i was born from PlayStation, but i reign from Final Fantasy.VII - Advent Children and this is Sebielina Saiya she is The Vampire Princess, of the Dark Forests."
Leif looks to his left to see Sebielina, gliding towards her companion.
She is clearly a witch, decides Leif.
"I am King Leif, of Deltora!"
"What is that black monster that spat you out?"
"Huh...That would be the Princesses wheels." said Cloud...He then realizes that he is speaking perfect English.
What has happened to my mother tongue?? Confused he stands back to gather his thoughts.
"Why have you come to Deltora?" asks Leif.
"Do you know something called the Shadow Lord?" asks Sebielina.
“What did you say!!" chokes Leif with a lump in his throat the size of The Wennbar.
"So you do know of it then, good! It has been killing many of my clan and the clan of the one who calls himself Cloud!" said Sebielina in her quiet and sweetly voice.
"We learnt that it came from a place called Deltora."
"You will come back with us to our worlds to help us kill this being!" stress Cloud and Sebielina.
So, will Leif and his compaions go to do battle or will he be glad to be rid of the Shadow Lord? Personally I think he will go, he does not appear to me to run away from a battle. What do you think? Final Fantasy website. http://www.square-enix-usa.com/dvd/ff7ac/ R*_*
Friday, July 31, 2009
more of conor's fan fic lulz
so im gonna paste the first bit then add to it here goes,
My senses, all of them start to dim and fuzz around the edges, like when you burn the sides of a letter to make it look old fashioned. This means I'm about to see something, usually something bad. But i guess i shouldn't be expecting the worst even when the worst is usually logically expected these days. Ok, here we go.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touch i was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am i seeing this?
Then i remember, 'it's what i do.' Draw. Why did i not think of this straight away, always draw what you see Alice, I try to remind myself of this every time. Reaching for the nearest pad of bland hotel notepad I start to scrawl down what I'm seeing. "What are you doing love?" I completely forgot Jasper was here, no time to explain. Draw. As the vision starts to fade ever so slightly, releasing my head from the vice that held it so tightly over the last few seconds the paper comes into view, slipping through my retina as the photographic image fades from my sight, replaced by a surprisingly accurate translation kneaded into the paper in front of me with the pen I am holding. The pen has started to crack under the pressure with which i was holding it. Sweat slides down the back of my neck creating a film that holds my shirt to my back against it's will.
Jasper. "I think i know where James is. He is here in Phoenix Jasper, here in Phoenix." "In that case we need to make sure Bella stays close by." How can Jasper be so calm? Maybe its just the adrenaline from my 'vision' but calm is the last feeling that my mind could comprehend, then i feel it. Jasper must have sensed my mood. Slowly my pulse slows, heart beat fades back to a normal pace and the last grip of the vice is finally undone. This is one of the many things that makes loving Jasper so easy and complete, his ability to set a mood upon an entire room, I truly could not suffer eternity without him. Then Jasper suddenly utters the worst possible scenario for this moment. "Alice, where is Bella." "Shit."
bit rough but just a draft will work on it later in the week.
My senses, all of them start to dim and fuzz around the edges, like when you burn the sides of a letter to make it look old fashioned. This means I'm about to see something, usually something bad. But i guess i shouldn't be expecting the worst even when the worst is usually logically expected these days. Ok, here we go.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touch i was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am i seeing this?
Then i remember, 'it's what i do.' Draw. Why did i not think of this straight away, always draw what you see Alice, I try to remind myself of this every time. Reaching for the nearest pad of bland hotel notepad I start to scrawl down what I'm seeing. "What are you doing love?" I completely forgot Jasper was here, no time to explain. Draw. As the vision starts to fade ever so slightly, releasing my head from the vice that held it so tightly over the last few seconds the paper comes into view, slipping through my retina as the photographic image fades from my sight, replaced by a surprisingly accurate translation kneaded into the paper in front of me with the pen I am holding. The pen has started to crack under the pressure with which i was holding it. Sweat slides down the back of my neck creating a film that holds my shirt to my back against it's will.
Jasper. "I think i know where James is. He is here in Phoenix Jasper, here in Phoenix." "In that case we need to make sure Bella stays close by." How can Jasper be so calm? Maybe its just the adrenaline from my 'vision' but calm is the last feeling that my mind could comprehend, then i feel it. Jasper must have sensed my mood. Slowly my pulse slows, heart beat fades back to a normal pace and the last grip of the vice is finally undone. This is one of the many things that makes loving Jasper so easy and complete, his ability to set a mood upon an entire room, I truly could not suffer eternity without him. Then Jasper suddenly utters the worst possible scenario for this moment. "Alice, where is Bella." "Shit."
bit rough but just a draft will work on it later in the week.
Wednesday, July 29, 2009
conor's fan fiction
i missed the last few classes i figure we are doing our fan fics about twilight so here goes.
My senses, all of them start to dim and fuzz around the edges, like when you burn the sides of a letter to make it look old fashioned. This means I'm about to see something, usually something bad. But i guess i shouldn't be expecting the worst even when the worst is usually logically expected these days. Ok, here we go.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touched i was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am i seeing this?
ok so that the start of mine im doing it from Alice's point of view (Edwards sister) she has visions this is her 'power' in the twilight world. I thought it was a good chance to write some descriptive stuff.
My senses, all of them start to dim and fuzz around the edges, like when you burn the sides of a letter to make it look old fashioned. This means I'm about to see something, usually something bad. But i guess i shouldn't be expecting the worst even when the worst is usually logically expected these days. Ok, here we go.
The lights dim in my vision white noise sears at my ears my tongue goes dry and any sense of touched i was used to dissipates as the scene fills the back of my eyelids; A long room, hard wooden floors varnished to perfection, yet littered with scuff marks from some kind of repetitive tapping or friction. Mirrors haunt the walls reflecting every inch of the interior in divine detail, where is this place? Why am i seeing this?
ok so that the start of mine im doing it from Alice's point of view (Edwards sister) she has visions this is her 'power' in the twilight world. I thought it was a good chance to write some descriptive stuff.
Tuesday, July 28, 2009
Dan
This is the prologue of my fanfic... Just playing with some ideas to set the scene.
It is from the P.O.V of Bella. (the main charater in the series)
Prologue
I have never feared for my own life before. I have never been scared of my life ending and the pain that goes with it. But after coming so close to death more than once in the past year, I have grown accustomed to the fact that one day, maybe not a long time from now, my life as I know it will be over. But for some reason, for the first time in my life that scared me. Not because I had goals or un finished business that I was eager to see through. I feared that I would miss out on the life that I now had in forks, a life that at one time I didn't cherish. A life with Edward.
It is from the P.O.V of Bella. (the main charater in the series)
Prologue
I have never feared for my own life before. I have never been scared of my life ending and the pain that goes with it. But after coming so close to death more than once in the past year, I have grown accustomed to the fact that one day, maybe not a long time from now, my life as I know it will be over. But for some reason, for the first time in my life that scared me. Not because I had goals or un finished business that I was eager to see through. I feared that I would miss out on the life that I now had in forks, a life that at one time I didn't cherish. A life with Edward.
Dan Twilight
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4641814/1/You_Got_Me
This one completely changes the storyline of the series. The only Parallels are some of the core characters. Cant decide weather it is a good idea or not....
What do you guys think?
This one completely changes the storyline of the series. The only Parallels are some of the core characters. Cant decide weather it is a good idea or not....
What do you guys think?
Dan Twilight
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4770452/1/Fearless
This is quite interesting. It is from Edwards POV and although it follows a similar formula to the book it is interesting to see that it completely changes the story.
One of the strongest fanfics I've seen...
This is quite interesting. It is from Edwards POV and although it follows a similar formula to the book it is interesting to see that it completely changes the story.
One of the strongest fanfics I've seen...
What Happens Next: The Courtship
Here is a nice example of a fan-fic written in Austen's style. The author picks up right after Darcy's proposal to Elizabeth in Pride and Prejudice, and though it’s a bit dialogue heavy the piece seems to capture the characters nicely.
Masquerades
Here is an interesting fan-fic that tells us what happened to Charlotte Collins, the Bennet's neighbor in Pride and Prejudice. I like how it is written as correspondence between the three friends (and that the author says the idea came to her while at band camp -- genius!). Though rather short in length, the actual writing is quite good.
Daniel Fanfic Idea
Fan fiction
Twilight
Hi guys!
Give me some feedback on my fanfic idea.
Below is a small blurb of my idea………….Tell me what you think?
Set after the events of the first book in the Twilight series Bella Swan and Edward Cullen are finally together without any worry… or so they think. Since arriving back in Forks being nearly killed by a bloodthirsty Vampire, Bella has not been the same. ..
After a visit to a doctor with dramatically increased blood pressure and fever doesn’t open up any conclusions to her health problems, Edward takes Bella to Carlisle. After some tests are performed the shocking Truth about the origins behind Bella’s strange sickness are explained and no medicine known to man will cure it.
Will Edward and Bella’s relationship be strong enough? Or will it will it crumble under the pressure?
One thing is for sure someone will not make it out alive!
Twilight
Hi guys!
Give me some feedback on my fanfic idea.
Below is a small blurb of my idea………….Tell me what you think?
Set after the events of the first book in the Twilight series Bella Swan and Edward Cullen are finally together without any worry… or so they think. Since arriving back in Forks being nearly killed by a bloodthirsty Vampire, Bella has not been the same. ..
After a visit to a doctor with dramatically increased blood pressure and fever doesn’t open up any conclusions to her health problems, Edward takes Bella to Carlisle. After some tests are performed the shocking Truth about the origins behind Bella’s strange sickness are explained and no medicine known to man will cure it.
Will Edward and Bella’s relationship be strong enough? Or will it will it crumble under the pressure?
One thing is for sure someone will not make it out alive!
Deltora, Final Fantasy DVD, and Sebielina Saiya.
Deltora, Final Fantasy DVD, and Sebielina Saiya.
I would like to infuse three mediums together they are Deltora Quest (Book) Cloud, from Final Fantasy (DVD & Computer Game). And Sebielina Saiya, Vampire Princess of the Dark Forests, Transylvania. (From my head).
Many years have past since the victory against the evil Tyrant the Shadow Lord.Leif, Barda and Jasmine are enjoying the quiet times, but no sooner do they begin to relax they are called upon by others that are not of their world. So the story begins...
As the night sky descends to allow in a new day, Leif is surprised to see a huge cloud dust in the distant heading for the castle at a speed that he has not seen in the kingdom of Deltora.He shouts to Doom, his most trusted confidante.
"Doom, come quickly!" shouts Leif! Doom, bursts through the door with his sword at the ready to find the King standing in the chamber-room alone. He quickly glances around the room; he looks to his king with a bewildered look on his face.
"What has happened, Leif?" asks Doom with much confusion."I fear a new enemy has arrived in Deltora." replies Leif, with a dread look on his face."What is it you want monster!" hollers Leif to the all black shiny object.
The doors on a black 2022 Holden Sport sedan open and at the exact same time the Kings heavily armed guards surround the entire castle rooftops the bridge is slammed locked!Leif looses his balance and stumbles backwards he realizes that a beautiful woman with porcelain white skin and light red hair is standing directly in front of him.He gains his step and points his sword, but she has disappeared? Leif is not sure at what he is seeing, are you a spirit?
"My name is Cloud, i am from a PlayStation game as well as a Movie called Final Fantasy.VII - Advent Children and this is The Vampire Princess, of the Gypsy Clan in the Dark Forests of Transylvania her name is Sebielina Saiya.”Leif looks to his left to see Sebielina, gliding towards her companion.
She is clearly a witch, decides Leif."
"I am King Leif, of Deltora!" "Who are you and what is that black monster that spat you out?"
"Huh...That would be the Princesses wheels." said Cloud...He then realizes that he is speaking perfect English.What has happened to my mother tongue?? Confused he stands back to gather his thoughts."Why have you come to Deltora, strangers?" asks Leif."Do you know something called the Shadow Lord?" asks Sebielina.“What did you say!!" chokes Leif with a lump in his throat the size of The Wennbar.
"So you do know of it then, good! It has been killing many of my clan and the clan of the one who calls himself Cloud!" said Sebielina in her quiet and sweetly voice."We learnt that it was sent from a place called Deltora, the princess found a way of transporting us to this place, it comes with living for many, many centuries you experience so much." interrupted Cloud.
"So, you will come back with us to our worlds before it evolves into a disater!" stress Cloud and Sebielina.
So, will he or will he not go with the strangers??? Personally I think he will go he is quite a honorable young man. What do you think… here’s a Final Fantasy website. http://www.square-enix-usa.com/dvd/ff7ac/ and meet Cloud.
R*_*
I would like to infuse three mediums together they are Deltora Quest (Book) Cloud, from Final Fantasy (DVD & Computer Game). And Sebielina Saiya, Vampire Princess of the Dark Forests, Transylvania. (From my head).
Many years have past since the victory against the evil Tyrant the Shadow Lord.Leif, Barda and Jasmine are enjoying the quiet times, but no sooner do they begin to relax they are called upon by others that are not of their world. So the story begins...
As the night sky descends to allow in a new day, Leif is surprised to see a huge cloud dust in the distant heading for the castle at a speed that he has not seen in the kingdom of Deltora.He shouts to Doom, his most trusted confidante.
"Doom, come quickly!" shouts Leif! Doom, bursts through the door with his sword at the ready to find the King standing in the chamber-room alone. He quickly glances around the room; he looks to his king with a bewildered look on his face.
"What has happened, Leif?" asks Doom with much confusion."I fear a new enemy has arrived in Deltora." replies Leif, with a dread look on his face."What is it you want monster!" hollers Leif to the all black shiny object.
The doors on a black 2022 Holden Sport sedan open and at the exact same time the Kings heavily armed guards surround the entire castle rooftops the bridge is slammed locked!Leif looses his balance and stumbles backwards he realizes that a beautiful woman with porcelain white skin and light red hair is standing directly in front of him.He gains his step and points his sword, but she has disappeared? Leif is not sure at what he is seeing, are you a spirit?
"My name is Cloud, i am from a PlayStation game as well as a Movie called Final Fantasy.VII - Advent Children and this is The Vampire Princess, of the Gypsy Clan in the Dark Forests of Transylvania her name is Sebielina Saiya.”Leif looks to his left to see Sebielina, gliding towards her companion.
She is clearly a witch, decides Leif."
"I am King Leif, of Deltora!" "Who are you and what is that black monster that spat you out?"
"Huh...That would be the Princesses wheels." said Cloud...He then realizes that he is speaking perfect English.What has happened to my mother tongue?? Confused he stands back to gather his thoughts."Why have you come to Deltora, strangers?" asks Leif."Do you know something called the Shadow Lord?" asks Sebielina.“What did you say!!" chokes Leif with a lump in his throat the size of The Wennbar.
"So you do know of it then, good! It has been killing many of my clan and the clan of the one who calls himself Cloud!" said Sebielina in her quiet and sweetly voice."We learnt that it was sent from a place called Deltora, the princess found a way of transporting us to this place, it comes with living for many, many centuries you experience so much." interrupted Cloud.
"So, you will come back with us to our worlds before it evolves into a disater!" stress Cloud and Sebielina.
So, will he or will he not go with the strangers??? Personally I think he will go he is quite a honorable young man. What do you think… here’s a Final Fantasy website. http://www.square-enix-usa.com/dvd/ff7ac/ and meet Cloud.
R*_*
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